Black Poetry : PoeticManifesta

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Nov 14, 2005.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok why title this PoeticManifesta
    Cause I want to flow with a different poet everyday
    To show love for there skills and show mine as well
    Poetic Manifesta what more can I say but you are a Queen
    I know that you a wonderful and this is your day
    Flow with me!

    Im caught in the poetic syndrome
    Lost in her poetic wisdom
    Speak in tongue when I hear her poetic wisdom
    Trapped in this poetic syndrome
    Shes a lover-Shes a rider-I love her skin tone
    The way I kiss make it hard to go home
    Bite one time she gets high-Wait this aint no Love Jones
    She manifesting things I cant speak about
    Her beauty unmatched got me scared to let this contact out
    Her beauty a natural high and thats what im speaking about
    I never had these thoughts and never had reasonable doubt
    Make a brother wanna write till the sun wants to shine a light
    Im running trying to catch her
    This the high I been speaking about
    Its no match its the kemistry why I need her now
    Look back at these females now
    No they cant compare and how
    I manipulated all there minds
    Now mind is sitting waiting now
    My lines cant be faded how
    She plays me now im down and out
    Playa I couldnt get it out
    She read me like a book and I
    No I cannot play a Queen
    Poetic can I be you Fen!!

    Much Love My Poetic Sista
    Brothers & Sista show your love to Sista PoeticManifesta
    We Love You Ma!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the sista wit fire
    poetic deep desire
    she a queen of glist
    my friend wit zest
    poeticmanifesta
    much love sis.......
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks tantrum for the tribute,
    i really dont know what to say,
    im not worthy of such praise..
    :flirt:
     
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    indeed u are my beautiful sista indeed you are......so worthy
     
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    Hi tantrum
    wow this is so nice
    You are indeed keeping the flow coming
    wow sis PoeticManifesta :)
    this is tyte

    Peace
     
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    Poet of the week you just keep on spreading the love I see. Another very nice tribute.
     
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    panafrica Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Showing love for my young sister PoeticM!
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :teach: Im still that country lil va girl...
    tryna cheat life...
    trying not to catch strife,
    I wanna play at work,
    and eat jello fruit cups @ home,
    Talk all day on the phone,
    like im 16 again,
    When i start to grow older,
    not wiser,
    im going to neverland!
    With a tall n dark peter pan!

    Most humbled...
    cause there are many more than I,
    whos influencs touches the sky.
     
  9. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Country gurl
    Welcome to my world
    When I was 16 I had a fro gurl
    Lemonade in the shade
    I thought cubics were real diamonds
    Thats crazy
    I got older
    I feel younger
    Sometimes older
    But poetic is still a friend too many
    You deserve this sweetie
     
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    Hey Popo.... continue to do yo thang sis...
     
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