Black Poetry : Poetically speakin

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  1. FloeticFire

    FloeticFire Active Member MEMBER

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    Poetically speakin
    Can I get your #
    No perhaps a moment
    maybe over jasmine tea
    in the park
    the one that over looks the sea
    Yeah I know its Lake Michigan
    I was just tryin to get in...
    your mind
    poetically inclined to undress you
    with words of seduction
    passion
    intimacy
    committement
    Poetically speakin
    if I told you I fell in love with you
    the moment I saw you
    The moment I smelled you
    My senses became interrupted
    with thoughts of
    you and me
    In ways I cant seem to explain
    See weed helps me think
    Helps me slow this love down
    Although I know we could love slow
    The herbs of the earth allow each
    moment
    each second
    each light ray
    slow down just enough
    to see your face
    in permanent grace.
    Poetically speakin
    What if we had that kind of friendship
    Where things were second nature
    Where our slumber parties
    Ended with me laying
    on top of your belly
    each heart beat
    DupLubb Dubb-Lub
    DUPLUP
    becomes one
    cooking cheese eggs
    no salt please
    Poetically speakin
    I wish I could take the chance
    to say these things
    Right now all I have is scribe and canvas
    A place where my chance is
    A place where rejection is minimal
    poetically speakin
    allows me to be vacant

    Peace Queens and Kings
    Copyright 2003
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    flow on poet
    loving this
    Peace
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UMMMM...

    SEE IM CONFUSED, I DONT KNOW IF UR TALKIN TO ME OR IF THAT WAS JUST A POEM, BUT IF UR TALKIN TO ME, WELL SHOOT, YEA WE CAN TRY N MAKE THAT HAPPEN LOL. THIS WAS TYTE... REAL TYTE.
     
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    wow..this was tight..
    great flow... :angel1:
     
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    nice... the flow was on point... I enjoyed reading this one
    thanks for sharing
     
  6. FloeticFire

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    Thanks All

    thanks for the love, poetically speakin although Im mesmirized at your use of the english language, cupid captured this heart many moons ago. Again much love
    Peace Queen and Kings
     
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    Poetically Correct

    Poetically correct
    thats how you came
    intellectual stimulation
    over that jasmine tea was such a sensation
    the park by the sea was even fine with me
    lake michigan how clever
    but i think lake you and me would be better
    i see you tryin to get in winnin and dinnin
    my mind
    and your so poetically inclined
    with those words of suduction
    causing an internal eruption
    poetically correct
    im in love to
    the first moment we touched
    i wanted to have you
    and the scent you found
    was love at first sight
    thoughts of you and me
    still linger in my dreams at night
    and i dont need weed to get me high
    im high off the sight of you this ebony man
    dont need to slow down
    just let love take its span
    and my face so perfect you think
    its just a reflection of what you do to me
    poetically correct
    thats how you came
    scribbing for me is endless
    and all i would like do is spend the rest of my time with you
    poetically speaking
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte as ever...
    of course...I had to think for a minute too...
    we're you talkin to poeticallyspeakin...
    but I see now...
    it was still a tyte flow...

    Full of fire...
     
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    this is tyte!!
     
  10. FloeticFire

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    Poetically speakin
    If I told you Im not the same
    As ones youve dated before
    Poetically speakin, if I told you
    I have the capabilities of loving you
    in sensational ways
    youve never laid eyes on
    Makin you experience heaven
    at least twice daily
    Or what ever the wish of the lady
    Poetically speakin
    If I told you I share similarities
    with you
    Poetically speakin
    could you handle it
    or are words upon the paper
    the limited ways of expressing
    the possibilities
    Maybe this is getting to serious
    Afterall
    We were just poetically speakin
     
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