Black Poetry : Poetical Orgasm

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Jan 14, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want you
    ~~~~~~~~~I need you
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I just have to feel you

    Worked your hormones
    thru~~~~>the day
    and~~~~~~>the night

    But now…

    if you’re down

    and want it like that…

    it is time that I do this up

    r~i~g~h~t!

    As I sit back & finesse
    your true loveliness

    I'll raise your hips with
    much ease

    For this lyrical tease

    Lick it fast
    Lick it slow

    Yeah…

    You’re ready to blow

    But hold on…

    just don’t bust yet - till I say
    the word ~GO~

    Hittin’ deep in your psyche
    I hit it hard…
    cause it’s soft

    Leavin’ no room to chance
    that you will not
    get off

    I sucked on your mental
    &
    felt up your heart

    When I see that fruit
    S~E~E~P~I~NG

    I won’t stop once
    I start

    Wiped your tears like
    "DA" man

    P~o~e~t~i~c~a~l~l~y
    taxin’ that ***

    I know I’m up in ya
    Pumped my love lyrics
    fast

    Stroked your {inner}
    with my lines

    Entering deep from behind

    Hella wax’ed that ripe spot
    with sexy phat rhymes

    Stuck in one of my fingers
    took it out;
    sucked it dry

    You begged
    GIMME SOME MORE
    Cause I’m scribin’ all in ya
    FOR SURE

    Pumped just a tad deeper
    Cause I do want to reach ya

    I knew I was there when
    you started to cry

    Brew your seed as I plead
    to release my lyricist need

    in your love
    soaking wet
    feel it drippin'
    Yeah I bet…

    It's really so pretty
    Your sweet mental kitty
    Honey, I can't tell you no lies

    We come to the point
    where up in this joint

    this poet can no longer
    hide in disguise

    In & out of that ripe spot
    I gave you all that I got

    Ha!

    Read me; feel me
    I’m no
    P~H~A~N~T~A~S~M

    I was here on the real
    baby
    You know the deal

    To drink the flow of
    your

    P~O~E~T~I~C~A~L
    O~R~G~A~S~M

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAYUMMMMMM!!!! GQ

    DA TOURCH IS LIT !
    SO DO DIS **** RYGHT
    POETICALLY BLAST:hot: :hot: :hot: :flamet: :flame:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee-Que.


    (my co-workers are askin' me if i'm aight up in heah!)

    oh my ****!! mmm... mmm... mmm... i am feelin'
    your flow this mornin', do you hear me!?? i'm
    speech-less at the moment... so imm leave this one
    alone!! just know that i appreciated it!! :D

    :heart:
    BlakGurl~
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Q

    You dont hit da mental drawz dawg!!! lol on the real this one was all flame!! You been in da lab again!!! Q you gotta cook this **** cuz... they can't handle it raw!

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** Reas

    I likes it raw like only GQ can bring it what was that line oh yeah "I sucked on your mental" ummm hummm let me get a "BIG GULP" ta go........ all flame fo sho



    ***Tastey Cakes***
     
  6. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE! NICE!

    **** GQ VERY STIMULATING FOR REAL GIRL ROCKED MY WORLD KEEP DOING THIS HERE GIRL
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $R - Nothin' wrong with a lil flame ery now and again! :laugh:

    BlakGurl - Did somethin' get caught up in ya throat? :laugh:
    Reas - Dawg I'm just tryin' to keep up with your right mentals!!!! :toast:

    Zorbie - I thought I was doin' the drankin' in this heah piece??!!?? :laugh:

    MADD - Dawg, thanks for the props I think... Girl??? :confused:

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    ...you a bad bad bad
    superbad brother.....
    you gone have larry flynt
    up in this joynt wanting to
    do an interview for the
    poetic hustler mag....

    this is a hot hot
    the core of the sun hot piece...

    ...go head and burn da page den

    blak
     
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