Black Poetry : Poetic word play

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jul 12, 2003.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside da scribe
    hide a gift
    smooth flowin
    even in bliss

    poetic word play
    watch what we say
    da motion of feeling
    is cast a notion
    expressed mix vibe
    flow from deep inside
    it leaks to the page
    from the pen
    some right
    some sin
    some of love
    some from above

    poetic word play
    a face of express
    gentle words felt
    as it caress
    da tender script
    words even slip
    so we dip down
    deep into thou soul
    and let it roll

    poetic word play
    a mix fit of slop
    ball into a creative
    as it's captured
    from the true poet

    foul play whispers
    they say
    words to be felt
    in da life we delt
    as a poet scribe
    the human mind
    go into the visional mold
    the tone of emotions
    swing as it hit in notes
    poetically sprayed
    of what was laid

    poetic word play

    is the heart of a poet
    the mindful motion of a poet
    a vision and pain forth da poet
    thee feelings of a poet
    all stress and caress of a poet

    poetically speaking in voice
    forth it's a poet's choice
    da love of da pen
    words flow from deep within
    written scribe reside in flowz
    da play
    is magical as it journey to minds
    it's the voice of ya heart
    it think in ink dip in poet's blood

    poetic word play
    can make u
    or break u
    it can shape u
    and mold u
    it feed u wisdom
    knowledge and hope
    so poetic wordz
    should never be broke
    never forsaken
    never a joke

    it's real what poet's feel
    poetwordplay................

    poetic Justice of da wordz

    $R 2003 all rights Reserved
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A LABOR OF LOVE

    Rich, thank you, for such beautiful truths & your love of poetry!

    You enrich many of our lives. :grouphug: :thanks:
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhh...rich u done done it again, lovin the flow scribe on
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    @ 1poet--

    Ditto!!!

    He must know this...
    Because his screen name is $$RICH$$!!

    :wink: @ RICH

    Poetic mind play
    is what makes all of our days
    Worth living and thriving in!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  5. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH is an undercover genius. He lets us know how we're doing it, but Rich is flippin' mad rhymes right in our faces. Look in the mirror hon....this was nice.
     
  6. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    handle yo bizness Rich man!!!! This was on point all the way...
     
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    I've got a virtual "tko" from this piece........never cease to capture me. You said it all...........ya #1 fan
     
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    I sho love me some poetic word play! Play on Rich! Play on!
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up 1poet ....likewise brutha

    the_story............thanks for feelin dis scribe i pose it speaks

    playwitit...........indeed ya right it's what keeps us together and humanly sane

    Royal_T........thank u so much for allowing my flow to enter ya world as i speak wit da pen

    angelic................ya so sweet and so kind .......i too watch
    ya fan as well.

    Bishop ............my brutha just working the flow as an poet
    thanks 4 feeling me

    purple .............ya alwayz on hit sistah thank u
     
  10. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich,

    This is a wonderful piece!! I am loving it!! Very beautifully expressed!!

    :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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