Black Poetry : Poetic Vision

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Dec 29, 2005.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vision This...

    Snatch the elastic wasteband
    Duck tape the punk
    Try to keep pace man
    Heads I put lumps
    Cash I take man
    Poets in a slump
    I still got faith man
    Getting over the hump
    Thats what they say and...
    Hating on others
    That aint my way man
    Guns to your back
    This aint your day man
    Try to show me love
    I just dont shake man
    I see a lot of threads
    That have no taste and...
    I like originality
    But thats just me man
    Im the hottest in the Chi
    Ripley believe and...
    Children of corn
    I'd a shot those kids and...
    White kids in my hood
    Yeah not my hood man
    Know it was the cops
    Yeah not my hood man
    They saying its a drought
    I cannot say man
    Im a keep showing love
    Even though some hate and...
    I even know your names
    This aint the place man
    Im a see you soon
    You in that place man
    Worth a couple grand
    You just aint safe and...
    You say that you a thug
    I just replace man
    Take your place man
    Cop that cake fam
    Droe I lace fam
    Doe got doe got moe got hey man
    So when you take the time
    To read my lines fam
    Dont rearange the words
    And try to flip my style dam!!

    Poetic Vision

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Tantrum Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep on expressing yo'-self kid, just saying something.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely can't change ya flip
    feeling all of ya script
    droppin this heat in drips
    to the poetic scribe & dip
    word
    y'all heard da lyrical lines drive.
     
  4. Phenomenon

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    Very tight flow
     
  5. queentswana

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    I hear ya knocking Tantrum, I salute you brother...you got it going on.
    enjoyed the flow, please don't hurt'em hammer ...lol
     
  6. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THank You for the Love
    1poet
    RICH
    Phenomenon
    Queentswana
    Much Love 2 All
    Unity is strength & numbers
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All you can do, is just do, you, and keep flowing the way that you do. I hear ya poet.
     
  8. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ty for the Love Watz
    I appreciate the support
    Black Sister
     
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alrighty my almighty poet this poetic vision is very unique. flow on Tant!!!!!!!:kiss1: :star:
     
  10. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You for the love sista Nevar
    I do appreciate the positive support you give
     
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