Black Poetry : poetic stroke

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    her breath smelled
    of infinity as my
    tongue traced
    from twin peaks to her
    river valley basin,
    switching between
    slow circular and
    slower figure eight
    patterns…deeply
    saturating her fertile
    crescent moist with
    a want that needed
    my touch, and my
    touch alone…

    meticulous fingertips
    knead poverty-stricken
    skin ever hungry for
    my nourishing touch
    …fondling her flesh
    as if my hands were
    a tilling plow skating
    through the topsoil
    of her soul…preparing
    her, the enriched land
    i had laid claim
    to, for reception of
    the abundantly
    dispensed seeds,
    screaming to be
    released from their
    heavenly bondage
    as to be planted deeply
    within the split seams
    of her paradise…expelling
    my version life deep
    within the womb that
    birthed civilizations…

    systematically
    searching for
    culture between
    sage's thighs, i
    perused and took
    refuge within
    the folds below
    her equator, finding
    infatuation with her
    southern hemisphere
    …both of us like
    butting bodies,
    marooned on an
    isolated island
    composed of black
    sandy beaches as we
    leave lustful lip-prints
    on the passion-washed
    shore…

    and we…we merged
    to form a new continent…
    our opposing tectonic
    plates shifting on
    molten magma dreams
    until our faults
    could no longer
    be concealed…

    *earthshaking*
    thrusts that solicited
    us to erupt violent
    flows of liquefied lust poems
    as we reached critical
    masses…and i, suffered
    from cataclysmic
    convulsions as i
    repetitiously penetrated
    sage's shallow abyss,
    which is now pulsating
    to my acappella poetic stroke


    and we both donned
    the wettest smiles
    as we fell deep into
    to this yawning chasm
    of bliss…hurdling
    towards forever, never
    to see or seek our
    individuality again…

    for sage

    :donttell: ...hookup
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :drums: I feel ya beat my brother... :hearthis: Sage..someones calling u sis! :hearts2:
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow..whew..
    It's a awesome script for an awesome person.
    the "Secret Storm"
     
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    Thank you, Thank you, Thank you...you're so beautiful to me!

    When I give my love to you
    I’ll show you summit altitudes
    Leaving you in pools of wet,
    With invariable utterances
    Unable to think, all senses peeked
    Habitual yearnings, left within your eyes
    ..................Your inability to say, goodbye

    When I give my love to you
    I’ll show what “real” love can do
    Discovering the deeper meaning of
    A lovers koo....
    Breaking waves upon your shores
    Leaving you powerless and yielding
    What I bring to you, What I give to you
    Will have you inescapably, yearning for more

    When I give my love to you
    You will receive
    Memories of other lovers?
    will part and recede
    There, within the drawing
    A realization will occur, that
    You’ve never been loved before

    You’ve never been loved, No

    Not like this.................not by me.

    __________________________________________________

    Oh...and by the way
    That last stanza was gorgeous!!!!!!

    hurdling
    towards forever, never
    to see or seek our
    individuality again…


    Your writing consistently leaves me awe struck!

    Love...(sigh) your beautiful spirit can not be compared. :heart::couple::heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SWEET RELEASE ON WARM LOVE I HEAR YA BRUH !
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hehehe smh you two are jes so mushy LOL
    but its so lovely :) ;) now...GET A ROOM ALREADY! LOL
     
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