Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poetic Slowdance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Jun 30, 2001.

  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words flow from my mind.
    I mouth them to my pen.
    They begin their poetic slowdance,
    3some of mental love making
    mind, pen and paper
    Ready and waiting to be deciphered.
    many interpretations,
    splashing impressions of it's poet.
    Mental communication expressing
    moods of the moment.

    copyright2001
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, dear poetess. and yes, i, too, can relate. continue to write...i'm watchin'.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
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    may i have this slow dance...

    around the floor of life and dreams
    and all those things
    poets and poetesses do
    and 3somes flow
    between me and you {and....hmmm}:)

    One.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SLOWDANCE POETICALLY

    POETIC FLOW OF YA SWEET HAND
    AS IT BOUND TO CANVAS THE MIND
    ENTERWIND IN FLAVA U TASTE THE BODY
    OF DA PEN........... TYGHT ****!! LOVIN IT.:D
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister, Thanks for the read.:)

    Baller, I would love to float in a poetic slowdance with you, me and hummm;)

    $$RICH$$, Thanks for the :heart:


    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
  6. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I dig this Coco

    Gotta admit I also dig ya name... love this piece from title to finish.

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful!!!

    And as you wind down from the day....the soft music starts to play....within your Poetic Slowdance.

    i liked this a lot...sexual nomenclature
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco

    Lovin' it gurl~ This is definitely a "10"!!
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From da heart

    Thanks Reason, I dig your work and name also. Your name takes me back to Earth, Wind and Fire days. ;)

    Shaneak, Thanks for hearing my music :)

    N2, I thank you x's 10 :)

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    coco

    got to show some love
    hea

    this is art

    and i'm loving it
     
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