Black Poetry : Poetic Ride

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mental attraction
    reaching in and bring
    ..........out the
    mental pleasure of release
    holding it down
    swaying to the words
    as they….are being laced
    in a way that fills the empty
    canvas….letting go and
    tryin to keep calm
    wanting to shout
    cant let it out..but a soft
    melody of…..
    singing
    exhale and
    just breath
    riding that poetic flow
    bonding in the
    middle of the orbs taking
    it up higher
    and releasing the
    being to be
    free…
    divinely leak into
    my mental
    feed my soul
    as it is created..in motion
    the pen rolls…..
    swaying up and down
    imprint a work that is
    stimulating da
    mind, enhancing
    the rhythm..just vibe
    as……….
    imagination comes alive
    da poetic ride
    within the galaxy of
    orbs mental tuning
    dancing upon the skies
    in a flow..bring
    colors alive grasping in the
    height that takes me
    on a poetic ride

    2004
     
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    Peacefully riding that poetic flow, nicely done.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ain't nothing like a ride on poetry!

    thanks...:)


    Coco :heart:
     
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    :spinn: Loading my bags so when does this poetic ride stop next? I have gas money..LOL

    yes a very very lovely peice!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    thanks everyone
    for the support and showing love
    to dis
    Peace
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    One word for this, sister: smooooooooth. :shades:
     
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    :)

    Poetic ride....better buy my ticket, cause I don't wanna miss the bus...lol
    This was very nice MBA :wave:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mzblkangel

    When I'm writing and really feeling it...or when I'm in the moment...currently living it or feeling the reflection of it...there's nothing like it. :D My best flows come from that. And I try to be in that state...that space...when I write or I won't write. :D

    :thanks: for sharing you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Money for all your
    support and givin love
    means alot..... :kiss:
     
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