Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poetic ride....sonnet #26

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    High over in the sea of compassion
    The moon sets as the love seeps through
    Rose petals circle and wrap me in so slowly
    As a magical wind pass as you touch my soul
    With ever heart beat my breath deepens
    For you’re my loves desires. As we stand face to face
    We walk the isles of Passion down by Lover’s Lane
    Not to far from Cupid’s Arrow pass the white gates
    A charmed garden of carousels floating
    With unicorns and angels singing
    We stand by the waterfall of love
    As the fragrant of carnations place us in a trance
    Placing our vows in front of God…at the alter
    Drifting only in our thoughts of each other
    As we say I do….

    (C) 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this here took me on a journey ride and back
    tyte drop sis... i like how it had da mind
     
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    What a lovely vow this was. This was pretty.
     
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    yeah made me wanna lay in one place and take it all in again
    had to read dis one some mo , i love how it took me on a ride
     
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    thank you thank you Richie Rich :love: i had to reread as well it takes me too
    within a dream of myth reality is there for i likes this trip myself...thank you again for all the great love given on this scribe....:kiss:


    watz...yes it was yes indeed..thanks
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i'm with watz on this one...
    a lovely vow, pledge...
    lovely,

    i like the title...it was sonnet 26 that brought me to you
     
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    thank you sister deepy for reading and replying
    i enjoy your sonnets as well....happy you enjoyed :D

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Wow!

    You said,



    Short, beautiful, and sweet!!!!!!!
    Loving it!!!!!!!
     
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    well thank ya sis!!!! glad ya enjoyed...Peace Angel

    Ps this my fav one right now :wink:
     
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    MzBlkAngel....

    Like Rich, this piece took me on a ride...a mental ride...a psychological drift off into fantasy land...wishing on a star....

    :thanks: for sharing this mental trip with us.

    :toast:
     
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