Black Poetry : Poetic Prayer

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can scream
    I can cry
    I can hurt
    I can feel the pain
    Lord come down on me
    Wash my soul
    And heal my pain
    Stop the crying
    Fold the pain
    Take me up
    Fill me with your glory
    And fill my void with your grace…
    For I been walk on
    And abuse to no return
    I been shattered
    And cant pick up the pieces
    For the weak see me as weak
    But they dont know my faith
    Yet they push
    For I treat all as I like to be
    A friend to those who is in need
    But yet I still get walk on
    I been push to long and to far…..

    I come to you
    Help me stand my ground
    And turn face and walk away
    I been push so far
    For the ones I trusted
    I can no longer trust
    Just love……
    I been ripe open still breathing
    And this pain I bare
    I cant seem to bare no more
    Lord take my hand
    And walk with me
    Through this valley of enemies
    I been push to far

    I feel the fire burning
    From inside out
    My nerves is on edge
    And my anger is turning to
    Madness…
    I been push to long and to far..
    Lord take my hand
    And lead me back to light

    For I know this battle I can’t fight alone
    I need a higher power
    To guide me astray from all this drama
    I been push to far

    And now I am in my hush
    To keep my calmness about me
    I been push to far
    And its hard to turn back
    Lord take my hand

    My life is a living hell
    And all the things around me is fading away
    I trust you Lord
    For you stand on your word…
    I lift my head in praise
    I trust you Lord
    Without a question
    For I know you will
    Take my hand…..
    I trust you Lord
    I was against the wind
    But now I walk with the wind
    In my life troubles
    I trust you
    That you have never turned away
    Lord I been push to far
    And I cant do it alone
    See defeat is easy
    But to rise above is the gift
    And in your eyes in my faith
    I shall overcome….
    And walk away stronger
    Buy yet they don't know
    My faith...
    Yet they push....

    Lord take my hand
    And walk with me
    Through this valley of enemies
    I been push to far

    Poetry Praise
    Chapter 2 Prayers
    (C) 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice prayer to hold u safe from madness
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich for the support on this.....at times we all need a little prayer
    ya know......
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautiful prayer...never to go unheard. And you're never alone as you are carried over the rough edges.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, this is beautiful!!! Stand strong and hold fast, sister - god will help you.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :?: EXTRAORIDINARY, thats it
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! i loved this to, man, i can't even type the way i want to! you saying "Fold the pain," and "In the valley of enemies," do you know that those are some bad :whip: lines? whoa! i was blown away, and the Lord is in this, that is just amazing, continue.................Our Father which art in Heaven
     
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    That faith will get U thru...

    Nice piece.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love and support on the flow.....Peace Angel
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was nice, girl! *hugz*
     
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