Black Poetry : Poetic Peace And Sweet Release!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetic peace and sweet release.
    My words like trickling fountains
    brought comfort to my weather
    beaten soul.
    Extensions of my memories and
    foundation of what I hold.
    My cup often runneth over,
    and there is no lying in sweet clover.
    Poetic peace and sweet release.

    Poetic peace and sweet release.
    Found me lacking of nourishment
    and left me thirsty for more.
    Sweet poetic melodies that would
    wait eagerly at my door.
    Unable to wait for keystrokes
    I write feverishly on whatever
    is at hand.
    No one could understand.
    Poetic Peace and sweet release.

    Poetic peace and sweet release.
    Like orgasmic shudders through
    my nerve center...I await the
    muse who daily visits and beckon
    her to enter. This poets foundation
    about to splinter.
    Poetic peace and sweet release.

    Poetic peace and sweet release.
    Filled me up to overflowing.
    My eyes shine with knowing.
    My cheeks are now glowing.
    The words are now freely flowing.
    Poetic peace and sweet release.

    BJS(C)2002
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this one...it's sometimes how I feel when I put into words everything that is going through me...once again...thanks for sharing your words.
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsB~
    I love this sweet soothing piece of poetry.
    You definitely have the gift to write.
    I'm feelin you. :)


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had to dust this off...

    It seemed only appropriate to add to Poetic foreplay!
    Hope it's as good for you as it was for me...LOL
    Blessings On Ya House! :wink:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're right... this is most supreme...lol
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is nice sister
    feeling cool vibes
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading and responding!

    I so appreciate your responses...Hope to continue this trend!
    Poetry is my solace in a world of chaos!

    Blessings On Your House! :geek:
     
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