Black Poetry : Poetic Passion (we became love) A Twision & BlueWater Collab

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Mar 27, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twision in navy
    Bluewater in blue


    I extend my mind to you
    Watching
    Eyes yet closed
    Letting you wander in the abyss
    Trusting your every move
    Feeling your hands
    Gently probe every thought
    You empty me
    Effortlessly
    Your soul straddles mine
    We begin making love
    In passionate fury......


    I felt you watching me
    Eyes closed
    I search, and explore
    Your thoughts
    Provoke, a yearning desire
    To know more of you
    My hands discover
    The Essence of you
    Feeling your tempo
    A void is filled
    Exploring deeper
    The shallow creek
    Now over flowing
    Holding secure
    Riding the current
    We made love
    In a passionate fury


    Inside you

    Inside me

    I reach

    We reach

    Inside you
    I decrease
    inside you
    I hide
    Inside you
    I release
    Inside you
    I surrender


    Feeling You
    Inside me
    The plunge
    Of each thrust
    Awakening the fire
    Feeling you
    Inside me
    Rouse a passion
    Of anticipation
    On your
    Release
    I surrender


    Inside you
    I'm free
    Inside you
    I explode
    Inside you I find me....



    One motion
    We explode
    Water
    Stream silky smooth
    From the
    Corridor
    Holding firm
    Secure
    I found love


    I become you
    I become yours
    We become each other
    Together
    We become love
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

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    i like...i like...
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    likes this
    flow on you two
    flow some more
    nice vibing together indeed
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. watzinaname

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    Wow, this was sweet and seductive. Great collab you two.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was woooooooweeeeee!
    as i sit in the mist of dis collab
    y'all on fire .....
     
  6. justbnme03

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    this was hotttttt
     
  7. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAYUM!!!

    Whoa!! That ws deep!! I can't believe how incredibly hot that was!! Every single syllable simply dripped ecstasy and passion... Wow, good job guys....
     
  8. ki-ki2004

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    wow! Wow!! WOw!!! WOW!!!! WOW!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!
     
  9. Bluewater

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    Hi sister Lovely thank you sis:) for your love:heart:

    hi sister angel thank you for feeling this:) and the love:heart:

    hi sister watzinaname ah..thank you sis for the love:heart:

    hi brother Rich :) yeah feeling this :) thank you so much love ya love bro:heart:

    hi justbnme03, ki-ki2004 Clio_the_Muze..thank you *smiling* all so much


    I enjoy flowing with ya brother twision wow...oh so nice...enjoy it deeply for real...thank you family for the love, and feeling US on this scribe:)
     
  10. twision

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    To all my brothers and sisters in poetry...... :thanks:

    Your love is the reason My pen never runs out of ink


    Bluewater- Enjoyed working with you as well. You are an extrmely talented sister....I feel honored to have collaborated with you


    Peace and love
    twision
     
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