Black Poetry : Poetic Passion II

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Aug 15, 2003.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I am very romantic and a lil old fashion.
    And when I speak it is with Poetic Passion.
    My lips hurl verbs like darts and arrows.
    My tongue sings sonnets like larks and sparrows.
    The sound of a poem spoken live, gives my soul
    such a beautiful vibe.

    Can't get you out of my blood this passion
    burns as I yearn and learn.
    Words popping in and out of sight, creepin
    in my dreams in the middle of the night.
    Inspired by whatever hits me...
    My Poetic Passion sets me free.

    Sometimes I sit and read a piece that makes
    me wanna cry , and when I see the truth
    within I never want to lie.
    The power surges like a flooded plain.
    It's muse showers me like a thousand rains.

    This Poetic passion has caused me joy and
    pain, especially when a good one is stuck
    in my brain. Eliminating and concentrating
    popping my neck as I go. I yield to the
    call of the Poetic passion and sit myself
    down and just flow.

    My passion is shared by many, an art
    form fit for Kings and Queens.
    Some short and sweet and meaningful
    some long that don't really mean a
    thing. Rambling pieces that take you
    two times to get the symbolic message
    inside.

    But with all this Poetic Passion around
    me, I lift my heaving breast with pride.
    A place to put these bubbling elocutions
    that come out magically as rhymes.
    Yes books may come and go from
    the best seller's list, but Poetry
    stands the test of time...

    Bjs(C)2003
     
  2. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this was very nice.......... keep them coming.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' yes love this here u have made me wanna !
    ooops did i say dat !
    flow on sistah
     
  4. hiphop4ever

    hiphop4ever Active Member MEMBER

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    Dis is true - tyte flow!
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks y'all! Glad you liked...

    It's good to feel like your words are not just floating in cyberspace...And that talented artist are giving you props makes it all the more sweet...To my sweethearts on Destee...Much love for the love you show me!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyte girl!:)
     
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    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes poetry is somethin lovely :)
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte and so right, i think everyone can feel u on this...
     
  10. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    chiming in with the rest
    much respect j.
     
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