Black Poetry : Poetic Orgy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NapturallyYours, Oct 9, 2006.

  1. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You’re all invited to my poetic orgy
    Now, now,
    Don’t be shy
    Take off all of your inhibitions
    Bare your true spirit
    Bring only your writing utensils
    Sheets shall be provided
    I do hope that you can stay UP
    This will be a long night indeed
    Let’s explore each other
    Your way, my way, his way, her way
    All of us a sea of writhing artists
    Connecting our minds, hearts, and pens
    Entangled in sheets, sweating, collaborating
    Covered in each other’s metaphors
    Reveling in pure creativity
    Savoring the taste of your adjectives
    Is this wrong? A syntax error?
    No, my friends, this is so write
    We don’t have to stop here
    We can change prepositions
    Is that haiku with you?
    I’m loving what you doin with that verb
    Let’s adverb and see where we can take this
    You, me, they, we’re all Pronouns and good at what we do
    So let’s get together and do this thing right
    We can make beautiful rhymes all **** night
    You don’t have to be perfect to come over and flo
    Just willing to let your brothers and sisters learn from you and grow.


    Napturally Yours
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow im feeling this queen!
     
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    Welcome back!!! Very nice scribe sista very nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word i can dip it this ...tyte nice to see ya pen drippin again !
     
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    Sign me up.

    That was beautiful and creative! Very unique. You put heart into this one.

    Really put a smile on my face. Thanks so much for sharing =)

    Sam
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was indeed sweet, I smiled when I read this, great work poet...^5
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amazing work.
    I feel u on this.
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What can I say? This was wordplay at it's finest. I felt your pen exploding poet, awesome.
     
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