Black Poetry : Poetic Orgasm

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The thrill of foreplay when our thought say what our
    lips cannot.
    How the thought of creating something makes me all
    hot.
    The rush of the touch when the imagination bends and
    stretches and curves and hit nerves
    that create verbs and adjectives
    and hit some more nerves

    The thrust when the poem takes form the convulsive
    contraction like something being born, ORGASMIC
    bottles of mind stimulating, conciousness vibrating wine.
    That electrical intellectual connection that makes you
    see yourself climbing forbidden stairways with a pouty
    lipped lover following close behind.

    YOU DRINK THE WINE....YOU LEAVE THE GLASSES BEHIND!


    BJS(c)2001
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was ALL OVA this....

    every step of the way......

    whew!

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well well well !!

    ya flava of fine wine leaves a sweet taste in my mouth
     
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    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "You drink the wine, you leave the glass behind!

    WORD! Cute drop. Revivin' this.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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