Black Poetry : Poetic Orgasimic rush

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mr marion, Jan 8, 2002.

  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ( this poem was inspired after coming from a oetry slam last night)

    Hush,
    Shush, the redundant metaphors about your mental state at stake
    Give me some mind bobbling energy about poetic history

    Feed me some enzymes about times of James Baldwin
    And his lyrical twin the pen

    I need a poetic Orgasmic Rush!

    Sock it to me thorough ly
    Some poets never hit the spot giving me the same poetry different slam
    Yes mamm!
    F**K my left brain cells
    Make me yell-- for more
    Send me to ticket lines screaming your name for more
    Like backstage whores

    Take me on tour about the ghetto
    About the private government intensities
    Give me some real POETRY
    Tell me about the birth control pill that didn't work
    About when you got fired from work
    How your marriage didn't work

    Give me a Poetic Orgasmic Rush!

    Put a condom on my ear so I can safely hear 7,8,9 different poems in one night
    Call me the critique ****---but call me real

    Don’t need no half ***
    half class
    poetry
    Don’t need no judge that was picked out the crowd giving me scores while chatting with a friend
    My poetry comes from within
    how you gonna give me score with no experience with the pen

    Don’t need no slam to reprimand me for going over 3
    All I need is the love a poetic Orgasmic rush I get on Destee!
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Givin' me shivers

    I always did love you for what you do to me....I am feelin this too!!
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. marion

    oooooooh! Now I see what it is that you want!! :lol: :D

    I love the hype in this piece! :smokin: :smokin: :smokin:

    Well written scribe from inside your gut! :wink:

    Write dem words poet!

    Always :heart:

    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LOOK OUT NOW !!

    YA ON A BLISS WOOOWEEEE! MR.M
    I SEE U:look: BUT DO YO THANG!
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TYTE SCRIBE POET

    LOVING THE FLO PUT ON THIS PIECE.:toast:
     
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    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many forms

    poetry comes in many forms and I live to write.. Thanks for diggin this new flow!
    Eternal --- much love for you too :0)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nuttin like some good ol' poetry. Especially the kind that moooves you. tight flo.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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