Black Poetry : Poetic Motivation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NittyGrit, Dec 10, 2001.

  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ever liked someone so much
    you tried to write them a poem
    and felt kinda funny
    'cause you really didn't know 'em

    Ever wrote someone a poem
    and tried to make it rhyme
    it took almost forever-
    'cause you started over several times...
    (the words just don't sound right)

    Ever wrote a poem
    that said everything right
    and thought to yourself
    oh yeah-this one it tight...
    (she is gone love me after this)

    Ever wrote a poem
    that said the wrong thing
    like "they call me yo-yo
    'cause you got my heart on a string"...
    (if that aint the lamest thing you ever heard)

    Ever called the radio station
    to dedicate her that song
    that spoke of the crush
    you've been holding for so long
    (took forever to finally get to the DJ)

    Ever been so nervous
    you felt just like a child
    when she finally said hello
    and you flashed that koolaid smile
    (ear to ear…mouth just bling'n)

    what yall know about
    writing little love notes
    signing them with xoxo
    and sneaking them in her coat
    (I know I aint the only one that did that)

    I’m sure I took yall back
    talking about all of this
    now let me give you a reminder
    while you sit and reminisce

    always remember
    to keep the relationship young
    by thinking of special ways
    to show love someone

    Peace
    NittyGrit01
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nitty

    Dog you had me cheesin on this peice! Rememberin all the silly things I did to show love...

    Thanks
    Reas
     
  3. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truth spoken
    keeping love young
    benefits us both
     
  4. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...

    how special...
    your words are
    wisdom to some...

    keep it real~
     
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