Black Poetry : Poetic Interlude== Dedicated to the Brothas

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As wondeful a thought it is to have been in your presence at a point and time

    I am sure that you and I have never met and the pleasure is all mine.

    And maybe in some parallel universe

    you and I converse

    or simply have passed the time

    with our minds entertwined.

    What ever the case may be.

    I am so happy tosee

    that you and I connect in a way

    that makes me want to stay and talk as long as the night turns to day.

    I look forward to our next encounter.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as i close my eyes
    and feel u near
    it was a great pleasure
    not even a fear
    ya dear heart clash like
    a wave that made our
    mental commet in a
    poetic lyrical sway as we
    pass through galaxy of
    compromise and enterwined
    in comfort of beings
    until the next twist somewhere
    on the crossroad we will pen
    i may never know nor see thy face
    but words drop will always be
    in place'd THANK U very much this was beautiful
     
  4. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You bring with you
    a delicious sense of the unknow and
    I willing loose myself
    in your poetic rhythm and essence...
    I'm so gone.
    Sunlight and the
    freshest of dew,
    I find myself in your
    maternal verses
    renewed.
    In a world where
    thoughts and opinions
    sometimes
    clashes,
    I am blessed and stimulated
    by the woman poet;
    a Phoenix rising out
    of the
    ashes.

    Much love and peace to you ma.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv: Is it possible that in a life
    unbeknownst to us
    you were the sun
    and I was the moon
    and we shared the heavens?
    And as you lit the day your warmth
    shine on me and filled me up so that I
    could light the night?
    For I feel you warmth in your
    words and you fill me to a point
    of bursting and overflowing
    emotions and expressions that inturn
    enlighten you and so the cycle replays
    from now until eternity.
     
  6. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was good it's funny how poems can just grip a person.I've felt that before...
    Great Work
    ~peace and love always~
     
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