Black Poetry : Poetic Foreplay

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I touch my pen and stroke the paper, I wonder if the
    PC would be safer.
    Smoothing the roughness of my words, stylizing the
    conversations that I've heard.
    Placing each syllable where it should be, but never
    are they close enough for me.
    Some ring staccato as the verbs fly from my lips,
    some swerve seductively like the sway of my hips.
    I grasp for knowledge the beginning of release.
    Smelling a fragrance of passion I now feel complete.
    Down towards the metaphors that trail on my thigh,
    symbolically I tremble and then I sigh!
    What does this process mean for me, that I can be
    poetically and intrinsicially free.
    Soft whispers from lover's lips that sound like made
    up lyrics. When I change them around he won't even
    hear it. Massaging the temple of my familiar I gather
    images from every part of myself.
    Gyrating synonyms and anonyms and swirling
    adjectives noises come from places and spaces...
    I remember faces, but not always names!
    Lips tremble as if waiting to be kissed.
    Then they purse for the moment they missed.
    Rising to the final moment of excstasy,
    I climb the raptured ceiling with my poetic verse
    exploding inside of me!
    BjS(C)2003 :smokin:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    i enjoyed this read
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da art of poetic love
    dis was str8 off da hook
    lovin it ...let da foreplay continue
     
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    this played so wonderfully on the mind...
    the journey...was "Aaaawesome"
    I think I'll have one too...:smokin:
     
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    I don't smoke but if i did, id bee sure id be smoking right along with both of ya''lll tight read:heart:
     
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    We've been stroked... by foreplay!
    The best is yet to come.
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! Thanks y'all

    I so appreciate you guys reading and responding.
    Thanks for the encouragement.

    Blessings On Your House!
     
  8. DestinyLove222

    DestinyLove222 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed it

    Nice flow keep up the good work.
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS RAW!!! NO PUN INTENDED.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh Oh oH OH!!! lolol
    [email protected] let me get some of that...:smokin:
    nana done did it again...
     
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