Black Poetry : Poetic fame

[$$RICH$$]

very nice .....lovin it
welcome to destee.com poetic playground
welcome to the family of love & peace
happy u join us to share and show love as love is given
be a supporter to the coz so worthy here welcome

 

[gempis]

This is extremely tight! Welcome aboard, mistaliberator. Nice to have you here.

 

[mistaliberator]

fam this is the last of the throwbacks
hope you really enjoy
and thank you for giving me a place to define myself

peace MISTA

 

[Auroraflower]

write on :spin: ....


i liked this piece to.....





keep writting....






loveauroraflower

 

[cherryblossom]

whose the blame for this poetic game
no one but i
even in vain
i build and instill deep black roots anchored in rivers
i have delegated my harmless body
i am in fact a distant part of you
whose the blame for this never the ones that lay claim to this
placing my pain in this
i see alone
speak alone
dream alone
with the force to move still waters
i am a fountain on top of the mountain
i represent the unknown i am u
i represent that thats lost i am u
i represent the black sista mutha brotha locked in chains
wrongly convicted but were not the blame
my face has been placed in unhealthy locations
forging my strengths
i
go against all that you see yes this is my personal invasion
i release my self at an unexpected speed
pen wont stop until i get exactly what i need
i release my self to find my self breathe and stop
to be my self freeze and flock to control my self
i divide my self so that you may listen
and dream of powerful things
what happened when we got here
we lost our way
we use to be kings
just like the crack we serve our selves
to loose our selves
shelter our selves living for the sick thoughts of cream
i have decided to be broke and go against the american dream
not a fiend for money but a fiend for whats free this poetry conducting me
powerful being breathing easily
now i can see my self
so i mirror my self to free my self
use exscuses to loose my self
now i cant help my self placed in a posistion to forget my self and my people
whose the blame for this
never the ones that lay claim to this only the ones that dont see fame in this

Now, Brother, YOU WROTE THAT!

This is FANTASTIC!

You had me all excited as I read!

This would be SO good as Spoken Word!



And MistaLiberator!