Black Poetry : Poetic fame

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mistaliberator, Mar 23, 2004.

  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whose the blame for this poetic game
    no one but i
    even in vain
    i build and instill deep black roots anchoced in rivers
    i have delegated my harmless body
    i am in fact a distant part of you
    whose the blame for this never the ones that lay claim to this
    placing my pain in this
    i see alone
    speak alone
    dream alone
    with the force to move still waters
    i am a fountain on top of the mountain
    i represent the unknown i am u
    i represent that thats lost i am u
    i represent the black sista mutha brotha locked in chains
    wrongly convicted but were not the blame
    my face has been placed in unhealthy locations
    forging my strengths
    i
    go against all that you see yes this is my personal invasion
    i release my self at an unexpected speed
    pen wont stop until i get exactly what i need
    i release my self to find my self breathe and stop
    to be my self freeze and flock to control my self
    i divide my self so that you may listen
    and dream of powerful things
    what happened when we got here
    we lost our way
    we use to be kings
    just like the crack we serve our selves
    to loose our selves
    shelter our selves living for the sick thoughts of cream
    i have decided to be broke and go against the american dream
    not a fiend for money but a fiend for whats free this poetry conducting me
    powerful being breathing easily
    now i can see my self
    so i mirror my self to free my self
    use exscuses to loose my self
    now i cant help my self placed in a posistion to forget my self and my people
    whose the blame for this
    never the ones that lay claim to this only the ones that dont see fame in this
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:
    welcome to deste..com
    nice scribe
    hope to see more
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mistaliberator,
    continue to add to the flame
    accentuating the fame
    in this poetic game

    Nice scribe..........
    Peace and Blessings
     
  4. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all i can say is thanks its a blessing to be felt and heard and under stood
    i am u
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not writing for the fame, just writing from within, very nicely done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice .....lovin it
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    happy u join us to share and show love as love is given
    be a supporter to the coz so worthy here welcome
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is extremely tight! Welcome aboard, mistaliberator. Nice to have you here.
     
  8. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fam this is the last of the throwbacks
    hope you really enjoy
    and thank you for giving me a place to define myself

    peace MISTA
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    write on :spin: ....


    i liked this piece to.....





    keep writting....






    loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  10. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Now, Brother, YOU WROTE THAT! :bowdown:

    This is FANTASTIC!

    You had me all excited as I read! :jump:

    This would be SO good as Spoken Word! :terrific:



    And :birthday: MistaLiberator!
     
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