Black Poetry : POET

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sweet baby_face, Nov 11, 2005.

  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed Sweet_baby face

    :star: You are a Poet. :star:
    What a serious drop of matter-of-factness
    I really like how you flowed this!

    Ask Remby.. I likes my coffee... but can I have a touch of sugar and some cream?
     
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    Back in the day
    I was listening to NWA
    Watching kid n play throw house parties all day
    Run Dmc walk this way
    Gold chains the swagger them days
    Penny candy-Cotton candy all day
    Lollipops from my doctor visits sundays
    I remember mighty mouse and underdog on school days
    Inspector gadget was my dream job
    21 jump street I remember johnny deep
    I used to love the robocop movies
    But couldnt understand them yet
    I remember my first visit to an amusement park
    It was a sweet baby day on my face was a smile
    She was young back then
    Had the same grin back then
    Scared of rollercoasters and clowns back then
    We went to ringling brothers our parents were best friends
    I would call our love groupie love back then
    I kissed her cheek she went an told her friends
    Jumping rope in the front was her thing back then
    She had the rawest nylons back then
    I look at her different now than I did b4
    Im a grown man-With a grown plan
    Naw
    Im
    A
    Poet
    Now!!
     
  4. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To yr coffee

    yes u may
    glad u like it.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet this made me look twice
    Nice flow poet
    We need to colab holla at me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome indeed your a poet ......
    i really love the way this flowed out to canvas
     
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    the truth will set you free and it has babygirl:hearts2:
     
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    Hi Sweet Baby face
    Well done
    loving how you express
    the didfferent of others
    and where you are coming from
    wonderful flow poet :)

    Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you're a poet and you know it, daggone it, you might as well show it. This was tyte.
     
  10. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank u so much
    Appreciate it.:hearts2:
     
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