Black Poetry : Poet Tree

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UBNaturally, Mar 14, 2015.

  1. UBNaturally

    UBNaturally Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowers,
    Blossoms,
    Blooms,


    Showers of awesome Spring time tunes,

    That briefly suspend the urge to get away,
    and turns an inner room into a canvas to play.

    My tree, my roots, my stem, my fruits,
    How does one consider the nature of it, when the one has many truths?

    Can a poet produce art if not for their words?
    Can trees bring attention to branches, if not for the birds?

    What good is a left without a right, or an up without a down?
    What burden is a thing that has sight, and yet has not sound?

    I say if these congruencies are valuable to create an ideal perfection,
    and from this we desire to choose and make our own selection...

    How then does the poet within express their inner free,
    Unless they too become a bird, perched upon their poet tree?


    Rough Freestyle
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the fruitage of the poetry tree. the possibilities are endless.

    the river floweth.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A poet bring forth life from what one see and think as it create to canvas
    the fruit of it's journey upon da tree poeticly becomes flawless like this piece of art written.
     
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    UBNaturally - I enjoyed the craft, flow and intent of your words. Nicely done. HH
     
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    UBNaturally that bird,
    having taken flight ~
     
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    Lovely n deep. thanks for. sharing the Tree
     
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