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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jan 9, 2008.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Poet.
    Thy hands of creation
    heart of heart beloved
    through written word
    with life of a poet.

    Poem.
    Tap together unborn
    wit growth of living
    painted pictures resounded'
    sweeps suddenly

    Poetry.
    Now moves in waves
    from it's master of lyrics
    with each stanza & rhymes
    that takes on rythematic

    Poetic
    Measures of different tales
    lace'd truth and what's seen
    by eye to canvas as she
    approach da world of readers.

    Light of the darkness
    breaking ova my face
    wit images / absorbed in silent joy
    as thy artistic flava pours
    delightfully in spirits of cares
    each fear ~ tear and feelings
    through emotions unveils life
    from da hidden garden of thy soul
    i so see thy poet as poet creating
    verses unto poetry whereas
    da poem speaks wit words poeticly
    she like a whisper listening and pose
    unconditional beauty , love , sadness
    from it's roots of thy creators mind.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$.....Stop tryna show yo talent:em3700:

    Umm Is this within a certain genre of poetry?????
    What kind of poem is it?
    or did you just do your thing and that was that(and make a new spot in Poet history)
    LOL
    Wonderful Poem $$RICH$$
    I loved the progressing aspect of it!!!!
    Flow on with the skill......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In every form of the word, it is a unique expression that leaves an impression in ink or orated. I love how each form flowed into the next and grew into completion. Excellent flow Rich.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It was artisticly created from da mind to bring life of it's nature
    as it clash with expressions to live upon da canvas , Thank u so much PLATINUM

    my style comes in different flavas shapes and forms

    Yes you are correct when it stain the page words become alive , Thank u dearly Watz
     
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    Very creative and wonderfully written.
    Loved the style and flow of your poem.
    Great write. You are indeed very talented.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'm so humbled , Thank u from my heart 2 yours
    ur one of a kind FattnBeautiful again thankz
    for the visit snf love shown here........................
     
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    Hey Rich
    Wow! Bravo
    You just know how to make
    the world a brighter places:rolling:
    Awesome scribe my brother

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u sister Bluewater
     
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    I betta get my thesaurus out next time I read one of your pieces...lol...you got a sistah over hear studying...but I ain't mad 'cause I love being able to learn from my people! Tight as always Rich!
     
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    Thank u with the humble soul and heart, sis we learn from each other daily
    that's what i love poeticly as i read poetry as they are created in verses as
    the poem speaks and teach i listen to da poet's hand .

    Have u ever heard the hand speak in tones so delightfully
     
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