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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rhyme4ReasonFBR, Oct 15, 2004.

  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    "Breathe for me"

    Though I walk through the valley of the shadows of....
    I shall fear no evil
    lest it be inside me
    my need to be free at the cost of heavens
    and its gifts forsaking the lies that fall out these lips
    "I'm no good for you love"
    my heart has been through too much
    and it's stopped long ago
    I'm now cold
    the light of the creator's voice in heaven
    have long since then called me home
    but selfishly I just can't let go
    Yet the best part about me is when I feel your touch
    permanently separated from your life in death
    brings me regrets of when you asked me to stay
    in reply I looked at you sideways and accused you for
    exchanging your man for a ***** whupped fool
    but it was selfishness then now trapped in my sin
    of not taking more time to let you know my minds fluctuations
    our freakiness should've been more about the mental
    and less penetration
    any joke can poke in a direction
    but it takes a man to understand directions on a map
    and know when the manhood should stop to make way for truth
    and to keep his love grounded in naive adolescence
    for the aspiration of possibility in all things
    so that a woman's flower can grow
    but the girth of being grown sometimes hurt
    like virgins opening for the first quenching
    of this thirst..
    in a desert
    forcing the pain for sake of curiousity
    and love
    uttered in every step when I pace the room around your space
    in a hospital bed now and there's **** I can do
    to make you wake
    not able to interact in breath or friction
    you now moving forward
    dare I to be addicted to hunger
    and God's no longer listening
    to my cries in the dark
    baby I pray selfishly
    please breathe for me
    don't leave me alone

    *silence*

    ~Rhyme4Reason_FBR
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee.com/forums

    wonderful to read this was awesome

    and dont forget us in chat now

    we be looking for you!!!!!!



    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic quiet flowz
    happy u join us in da mix
    welcome to thecommunity of love & peace
    as we share and give love upon the family :love: :deal:

    do hope you stay and enjoy the whole house and decide
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    welcome brutha :spin:
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    awesome scribe look to read more of you .......
    from above blessing u some love ..Peace!!!!!!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And want an entrance this was, left me shaking my head....Pondering the thoughts we have when precious time was wasted, when it's forever too late. To say that this drew me in, would be an understatement. Flow on poet.
     
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