Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poem:"Why I Stay"

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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    "Why I Stay"

    Beautiful....

    Beautiful....

    If i closed my eyes one moment to visualize
    what perfection in your eyes makes me stay
    when I look at you this way
    You think I'm playing
    with mental foreplay
    and the display of my affections
    erotic imperfections and the directions they point
    but that angel on my shoulder tells me to
    cease
    chill
    and
    be still
    ease my bitter sweet intentions
    wanting to cuff that *** and trancend dimensions
    like you were a version of a virgin
    certain depths that were never untouched
    like **** wasn't invented till my pants came undone
    I wish that I'm some how your "chosen one"
    Your "God's Son"
    as the angels fall
    sometimes I lay awake from above looking down
    scared to disturb your beauty in case u fade away
    to lose this ascension I found
    below the gravel I worship at your feet
    your seeds in my soul has sprouted my conceit
    "I don't thinkin anyone on this planet can love you like I aspired to reach"
    your unreachable stars and dive to your abyss's depths and in the darkest mist we wept,
    so in that I believe we shared something
    things came undone
    unraveled souls as we talked about
    times traveled, mistakes conflicted and appologized for them one by one
    triumphs on whatever dates were honored as important
    unifying our two paths over a sip of coke, crown and candle light
    and inside you I found refuge
    for the night

    and the rain fell

    that syrupy sweet smell
    when I hugged you from behind

    wiping off the steam to find love staring back
    in the mirror

    as an angel spoke to me

    your words were sweet exstasy

    the brown eyes and inviting smile said it was ok to lay down in between
    and not worry about what was beyond your embrace
    **** the taste of your face when i'm weakend to come inside that place
    but common sense pulls me
    no matter how much i miss you
    or how deep I kiss you, the flaws are there
    and I feel deep down u accepted me
    and for that is why I'm still here
    there's no were else love would let me be
    and then your eyes
    they define me

    baby

    and that's why I'm still here

    ~Rhyme4Reason_FBR
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a very lovely warm flow here ......spread it like wild flowers
    tyte drop bruh !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I don't thinkin anyone on this planet can love you like I aspired to reach"
    With lines like this, you can't help but to say....wow.....Flow on brotha.
     
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    diggin this flow my brother awesome!!!!!
     
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