Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poem:"Thinking of It"

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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    "Thinking of It"

    Thinking of it
    shaken by it
    just wanted to touch it
    lick my lips up in it
    watch what cums out of it
    melt some ice cream over it
    drip some honey off it
    thinking what next flavor to put on it
    opening the legs wider to better see it
    talking all this isht to get it
    getting the chocolate off the fire anticipating the desert of it
    jumping through hoops to shine daylight on it
    now urges to get inside of it
    confused by it
    just greedy for it
    by what motivates it
    such a powerful it
    the **** controls it
    the lips and hips navigates the speed of it
    some try to put a lock on it
    bedframes broken down trying to get my name on it
    some envy it
    while some coalitions plot on it
    nation's wars been fought over it
    and lives given to save it
    I'm such a once upon a time slave to it
    I once needed to be saved from it
    sometimes a quiet it
    other times a gaseous it
    songs written in how to get it
    songs are played to motivate the gift of it
    but secrets are held inside it
    when lips speak directly into it
    nothing escapes it
    sometimes she fakes it
    mostly we try to delay it
    holding on to it
    some swear a thong by it
    some try to disrespect it
    some may never get it
    but I'm still thinking of it
    still trying to rhyme words with it
    still wanting to readjust the curves of it
    still conceited that I can make it
    -uncomfortable when I walk by it
    she crosses her legs to keep a leash on it
    but when I lick my lips it escapes
    breaks the chain, hops the fence
    we both want to bring peace to it
    I'm still trying to learn how to sleep next to it
    And one day to finally complete it

    Thinking of It
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL all i know is
    i gotta have it
    sho nuff want it
    love to feel it
    dip deep in it
    mix it up like coco
    twisted tongue it
    fingertip play it
    whatever it is i must take it .

    dis was a hot dripping spicy flow .....tyte
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yall nasty...lol

    this was a tight flow...hmmmm
    ice cream huh....well anyways i likes the vibe
    flow head on....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a thorough vibe here, brotha, threw the whole spice rack in it, I see. Flow head on poet.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop:

    Excuse me for my lost composure
    but my words lept from me and
    I must go look for them immediately...
    If I can save myself from being
    consumed by the flames that
    are lashing from the words
    in this flow...


    Whew...I need a drink and some air...

    this represented the "hotness" to the "fullness"

    Tyte work...
    sage
     
  6. sevens_love

    sevens_love Active Member MEMBER

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    uh yeah ahmmm
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    You can have it
     
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