Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poem:"The Love that Made Me Bad"

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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    “The Love that Made Me Bad”

    By the heat of your name
    Instantly my intentions turn to flame
    Sucking all oxygen out of that space
    Caressing the smoothness of your form
    Love led us to the steps of this storm
    Water drips down your silent lips
    The bass of my voice heals
    My fingertips play
    Praying for my directions to be warm
    Passion is my only vice
    More like a dog at your feet
    For the parts of you that defy gravity oh I crave
    For in the night my eyes open wide
    To better focus on the gift of your thighs
    Holding my head down under your rivers flow
    A blue moon is your heart
    A dark blue holds the mantle of your sky
    Your fruits riping on the vine
    The scent calls out for me
    A red scarf to close your eyes
    The depths I’m willing to sink
    Just to bring heights to your name
    The rules I break a sweat to learn
    Just to cheat to win at your game
    I saw your change into that butterfly
    Emerging from a closed place
    Entwined in your climax I’m that perfection
    And in that death you make me new
    Fallen weakened
    by your moans and screams
    Baby I committed suicide
    Selfishly
    I need your lust to breathe
    My love can’t handle the responsibility of
    That something else to do
    The innocence of you that makes me bad
    Orgasmic juices gather to form my foundation
    Flows in my mind rise and fall to find comfort in our positions
    I felt your world as the legs surround me
    All I do is lust for you
    And vibe for attention
    At the height of motion
    Of emotion
    I feel the reason as my strength leaves me once again
    My sky darkens oh no not again
    shortness of breathing
    My life is leaking
    Out the love that has made me bad
    And in the last glimpse of your smile as my spirit
    Rises above physical
    The familiar light and the tunnel
    And I remember the rigomortis as I grabbed the **** out of you
    Just to hold on
    To maintain
    Because you went faster
    Control wasn’t mine
    I’m shaking
    I’m Shaken
    So weak
    I can’t breathe
    Breath taken
    At the extreme height of erection
    I’m cuming
    Baby I’m cuming
    I’m cuming
    It’s here

    Soaked in death

    again

    The love that made me bad
     
  2. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is really nice
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flowing u really spreading ya skillz & talent
    keep it coming
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa poet you took us passionately there and back. Flow on brotha.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was hot i enjoyed this flow....think i am about to scribe to your fan club.....nice flow my brother
     
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