Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poem:"That Night"

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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    "That Night/Dark Passions"

    That night

    Hello?
    The darkest night in that place
    confessions
    obsessions seeping into the night
    moments of honesty
    flowing uncontrollably clouding all sight
    strangers of the past
    breathing deeply at the start of something new
    dancing to a rhythmic flow unheard, unseen, unsaid
    the paths traveled though long and hard
    leads us to here and now
    as I stare into your eyes
    clutch your fingertips and state my vow
    our hearts melt when in close proximity
    she stops then tears into me
    my soul of fire
    trapped in her stare
    she said baby if you knew what I needed can you provide
    because if all you think with is what you see, then stop
    my darkest passions need more than just a glorious ride
    I smiled
    a single tear drop hits the floor
    being strong of will to consumate the future
    but hold respect to the lessons of before
    gotta possess a key, specially made for me
    and have access to my door
    because good things are hard to find
    and even harder to get
    wish I knew what drives these flows
    and makes those panties wet
    How to get my lips around it before my tongue decides to enter
    How to make you hot and soothe that spot
    then blow accross you like winter
    *wind*
    Just thoughts and contemplations
    no answers nor regrets
    just pressing the phone deeper in my ear
    and holding on for what's to come yet
    Hmmmm
    the night is late
    my body can't wait
    for that moment of you
    to get on my plate and curve my fate
    and see how hungry I am

    It's passed my bedtime
    words lingering in my thoughts forever
    no sleep tonight boo
    just
    ****
    ****
    ****

    Goodnight baby

    "That Night"
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep flowing ~ Enjoyed this to the fullest!
     
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    nice flow...keep on flowing :horse:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flow poet keep scribing
     
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