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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    "Regrets"

    I would have never taken advantage of you
    If it was a shortcut to your heart
    I shouldn't have taken it
    when I read the sign
    the long road might've been the better start
    Taking my time on this journey
    Make you know we are of the same birds
    when we compare feathers
    In my bedroom there was no trace of society
    I wish you didn't have these strange feelings about me
    You say it was bad to lust for me
    to not understand my heart fully
    But what you didn't know honey
    it was over when you looked at me
    bully
    it was over when I saw your smile
    it was over when we hugged
    it was over when I heard that laugh
    I was in danger on the phone
    I was in danger when you said you were coming down
    when we kissed there was no sound
    not even the music could break the barrier
    Your highness can't you see
    I had no control left of me
    then you let go of me
    left me in silence
    what is the next step?
    is there a next step?
    do I leave that *** alone
    until you can come to terms with
    regret
    I guess you felt you lost something
    when we were together
    AND i WAS LOST WHEN YOU UPPED AND LEFT
    was there a game I missed?
    A time limit of how long you supposed to delay
    my gratifications
    sentence me to extended nights of masturbation
    and hungering for you alone

    because YOU felt like a SsLUtT

    and no longer answered your phone
    that one night we spent has become a dirty secret you want to leave alone
    and I have to understand that
    it was just a moment
    when love came home

    so each night I'll force myself to forget
    forget how good you felt
    forget the **** I had yet to know about you
    and forget that I just might've loved you
    if you only knew
    that if all men are dogs
    then all dogs aren't built this same
    but if dogs are all we are
    then all least this dog knew your name

    fukk it...

    I'll leave it to REGRET
     
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    I heard dat ! ............................
     
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    "Make you know we are of the same birds
    when we compare feathers"


    It's lines like the one above that made this poem such a great read. Women, due to conditioning, often feel that if we become intimate sooner than we expected, then somehow we're seen as sluts. It happens...flow on.











     
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    these lines here spoke volumes to me...and yet I can't really explain why...
    awesome write poet!!! :welldone:
     
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    i likes you took me on a poetic ride wow very deep thoughts awaken with this...nice flow Angel
     
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