Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poem Never Written

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by oldsoul, Aug 14, 2005.

  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    for that moment in tyme
    that poem shine
    in fashional design
    line by line
    and rock my mind ........

    ONE POWERFUL UNWRITTEN POEM I EVER LAID MY EYEZ UPON THAT LINGERS

    tyte poetic flash if just that very moment
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice....i love the title...and they way you ended it
     
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    Guess this is one of those things you don't care if the master here's you say or not, cause you never really wrote it, right? (Hopefully, oldsoul will get this) Such a creative style and potent message.
     
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    Great flow Oldsoul

    Did it kick me out?
     
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    Awesome piece...of the unknown/seen/heard, not to mention, practiced
    that's deep,
    "Poem Never Written"...
    ~yet~
    "Poem Never Forgotten"
    of
    what was read
    for just a
    ~Moment~
     
  7. sonnee01

    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW....that was truly deep.. I now find myself stuck on "pause"...and in deep thought.
     
  8. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For this poem...all i can say is Wowwwwwww


    my mouth is hangin open....this was a deep flow...

    please keep it goin....

    peace
     
  9. Earftones

    Earftones Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Old soul-from what I can tell ur deep
    Peace
     
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