Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poem:"Motivations"

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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

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    "Motivations"

    The *** motivated the outfits to fit tight
    fit tight to generate a vibe to the song
    the song was an afrodeziac when fused with the dark lights
    dark lights made dark things look so right
    so right when lust brought them together to call it love
    it was love of course sent from up above
    above the game they both played
    played the notes to make the heart stay
    the heart stayed over night in the bed he layed
    he layed for the comfort zone in this relationship
    relationship with little discussed only leads to arguments
    arguments that quickly makes her path bend
    paths bend when he thought the relationship ended
    relationship ended he didn't mean to get her pregnant
    motivations for the *** in the tight outfits didn't meant to get her pregnant

    now the new verb for this deeper level
    he must be responsible
    capable of the impossible to teach a younger rebel
    single now his life is plenty miserable
    love don't want him now that he wants her heart back
    heart back he's broken her love is well intact with the younger
    and she has a man now
    his ex ******* friend so who's the man now
    men now pissing territory makes this one complicated story
    complicated story never ending
    never ending threats to get tossed into the system
    in the system he lays awake at night and wonder does his love miss him
    miss him and his son should never have to say goodbye
    goodbye should never been in a father-son reply
    motivation for the deeper level to understand why he had to say goodbye

    **** it, if she's with someone else so why **** up my wealth
    **** my wealth how can I find someone else
    someone else is teaching in my spot when her heart runs hot
    hot hearts and disrespectful now
    who are the parents when adults get childish
    childish conversations now fishing to find ****
    **** that don't even matter
    motivations misdirected crying about my ****** up wealth
    arguing **** that didn't matter

    But my seed gotta eat
    regardless if my soul is feeling it
    thinking back to when I had her *** and I was feeling it
    I shoulda took that time to understand how to treat it
    no regrets in what my child's name meant
    stronger now since my heart's bent
    between 2 lost souls and cloudy futures
    but one thing is for sure
    what little I have my child deserves more
    plans were delayed remember when that song was played
    because selfishness gave me choices
    selfishness took some of my voice
    selfishness sat me down and made me listen
    that life isn't always about me

    Motivations is all I have left to breathe
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sigh* :read: you know what brotha...
    Most people symbolize but your poetry is so...real
    its as raw as it is honest and passionate
    I am enjoying it thoroughly :look:
    so hurry up and dont stop :)
     
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    this was very well written
    your poetry its deep
    with every word
    speaking pass volumes
    flow head on poet!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with trinti, your words speak out, strongly. And the rhythm in this piece along with the repetition of certain phrases, send your thoughts all the way home. What is the greater good indeed. Applause....
     
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