Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poem:"***** Love"

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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    "***** Love"

    ***** love and those that think they can sum it up to a simple 4 letter word left on the bathroom walls and stalls of pride and jealousy
    where blind people painted what they thought they saw in me
    meanings lost in translation through countless languages
    responsible for how many wars?
    now you wanna bring that bull**** to my door and claim its real
    you think you gonna bring this real love to me?
    You'd have a better chance playing the lottery
    How you gonna carry love with no vessel?
    how much did your love weigh today?
    Does it fit in your pocket ?
    when that homeless man asked for change and you said you had nothing for him today
    Where was this plan then
    Man can't you even see
    That **** even blinded me for that moment
    when I thought I loved this set of curves and *** in my past
    that took the beauty in my life and made it trash
    left a gash in my heart in the aftermath
    but it's cold now I'm all I can ever have
    Now you want to bring this bullshyt back to me....
    I can't live in love that's been stretched too thin to maintain
    the needs I have accumulated since the pain
    if I turn my back to you I'm defenseless
    my pride won't let me sleep long enough to fall for a kiss
    so we at a standstill on this anthill as I look down and behind you
    to see what paths you and I been through that u want to forgot
    a guinea pig I'm not,
    don't you know that if we screw my life is sharp enough to cut you?
    When you want to be held I can't hold you
    You want sympathy even after the truth I showed you
    so why go through what can be avoided til life offers me better
    You wanted love
    and I phucked it
    now show me another purpose

    ***** Love...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh now this was off the scale but i feel ya
    this is tight and posed well...diggin da vibe
    my brother...Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was heavy but understandable from the deep cut.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes games of life and love hurt so bad it feels as though you've been cut like a knife. Flow those emotions onto the page poet.
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats hot as h*ll... mainly becuz I can relate. hot, str8 hot...
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that sh#t was tyt.i love the way you flow,you got mad talent.

    keep it up...

    much love.
    plain
     
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