Black Poetry : POem: i'm new please tell me whatcha think.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LuvnMosDef, Mar 12, 2003.

  1. LuvnMosDef

    LuvnMosDef New Member MEMBER

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    It was I love you. It was I need you. It was I can't live without you.
    It was those nights that you said you couldn't sleep cuz I hadn't talked to you.
    It was us chillin at the park,
    and afterward it was YOU rushin me
    because it got to dark.
    It was the Blockbuster nights the flirtatious fights
    the times you wiped away my tears tellin me it was gonna be alright
    It was you bumping MosDef and Talib just cause I was around
    It was you cheering me up and never putting me down
    It was the kisses, hugs, the laffs and the back rubs
    It was them beautiful locks in your hair.
    it was me really beliveing you cared
    It was.... well actually it wasn't
    you acted like someone who cared but in reality you're someone who doesn't
    ***** it was fake and thats all the f****k it was.
    So I'm going from someone who just acts like he loves me to someone who actually does.
    And I'm moving on to someone who's not gonna leave just cause I'm not ready to ff****k.
    Yea, and you can get your hand from the back of my neck cause I'm not going to suck.
    What you think I owe it to you cause you spent a couple bucks?
    Well, dawg, if you think thats the way it goes I guess you're freshh outta ffuccin luck.
    You probably do this to alot of girls and, some are willing to take your ****.
    But what goes around comes around in God's good time, u kno just like they say... payback is a bittchhh.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YA YA SISTA HOOD

    LuvnMosDef, welcome to da hood! Get up and roll wit some of the mos DEf sisters in the poetic universe, right here... DESTEE' juke joint is the spot. You fixing to flow right off the umbilical cord! PEACE.

    1poetsought ~



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  3. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aiiight!!

    AAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!
    we hear you sista, I know he didn't think he was about to play you like that. They don't know they can't mess with one of us, we don't take no ****, and pay back is a ***** (black as hell with PMS).:D :cool: :D :cool:

    I'm Sayin...
     
  4. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    smh...and backing away verrrrryyyyy slowly...so as not to make a sound. lol


    *scribblin' on da wall* Btw, nice piece.
     
  5. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice stuff...almost like I was there....as a matter of fact I was...it was just in a different place...same story...not my loss or yours...but theirs.
     
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