Quiet Poetry Lounge : Poem:"He Left His Son"

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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    He left his son

    Everytime I close my eyes I live in fear
    REOCCURING DREAMS
    NIGHTMARES
    wishing death took my place
    PEEPIN FAMILIAR STRANGERS IN MY FACE
    things are hard
    can't see my baby in old wrinkles
    times are gone and life is now
    my vow to see how my innocense left ASIDE and raise a child
    alone to raise this child
    revolve lifes tables wishing my father back now
    cause I'm drowning with no lights in the place
    praying for an angel to come down and touch my face
    time is wasted on foolish things
    what you die for you can loose
    hurts to choose in God we sin
    a serious thing
    in the black the green and gold
    REMBERING THOSE WHO DIED
    WHERE I WAS FROM
    WHO SHOT THAT GUN
    WHO GONNA RAISE HIS SON
    SCREAMED SO FUkKIN HARD
    HURT MY fukking LUNGS
    AS HE GASPED HIS LAST
    On one lung
    HIS NIGHT TO DAY IN REVERSES
    GENTLE CURSES FINDING COMFORT IN BIBLE VERSES
    THOUGH HE LONG GONE THE DAMAGE IS DONE
    I CLOSED THE EYES OF MY FATHER
    CAUSE HE LEFT HIS SON
    HE LEFT HIS SON
    he left his son

    THINKING OF NIGHTS WHEN I DIDN’T MAKE IT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt scribe poet !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The pain in this cuts deep poet, emotively written, I hear ya brotha.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you brought this felt the pain and hurt in this one...nice lay..Angel
     
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