Black Poetry : Poem:"Foreplay"

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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    “Foreplay”

    Tracing those pretty lines
    In my mind
    Her form is so fine
    Canvas is empty
    Sheets pushed aside
    Skin so smooth barely lit
    By the softest candlelights
    Laying down to find that warm comfortable spot
    Stomach rising to maintain anticipation
    Breaths exhaled side view as you
    Pose for me
    Legs spread out before me
    Purposely teasing myself
    With trails of kisses
    Body lays still
    A Portrait locked in my memory
    When you gave that gift to me
    Close your eyes now
    Opening vast horizons
    In the way I play with your hot spots
    A gentle breeze now
    I taste of it and breathe
    Wiping a little sweat from your brow
    Escapes the need to hide insecurities
    Just laying here, being naked for me
    Wanted to cause you just that little bit of pain
    In the weather just praying for a little rain
    To make you wet for me
    The pain of stress falling
    Leaving just a smile at the thought of my name
    And curiosity
    A curiosity that became too much
    So much that I told you everything
    To motivate you to do what you wanna do
    To the point where you demanded my touch
    Wanted me to stop playing
    Teasing with no satisfaction promised
    Just the breath saturated with mint flavors
    To corrupt your kisses
    Our lust tattooed everything
    Oh, the synful thoughts that spun around my head
    The wet sheets that curse the bed
    I’m trippin in how quick a song can take us away
    All the lust gone red
    Turned my intentions bad
    Tattooed all that I am
    All that I see
    Everything that makes you taste so good to me
    That feeling I feel
    Nothing in between
    I’m addicted to touching you
    I’m addicted to your depths
    Not even talking about actual sex
    Everything that leads up to our sins
    A picture I can’t stop sinning
    My demented need for you to feel me
    And know that I’m not alone

    In between you

    I’m not alone

     
  2. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the imagery in this piece was intense and so vividly clear. i almost felt like i was there, that makes for great poetry. keep inkin' em. peace

    Lyr1c
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop poet!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A warm desire described with such flair. You certainly did bring us into the moment. Quite a well written flow poet.
     
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    OMG....this was so tastefully marvelous...it's like a drink of chilled wine that I never had but memorized the anticipated flavor.

    Thank you for sharing. :hot:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmm i can just read you all day very nice...now get ya butt in chat :spank: and read my brother friend...been missing ya....Angel
     
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