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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

    Rhyme4ReasonFBR Active Member MEMBER

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    "Folds of Love"

    How I lust for that room in between
    when I went down the path til I couldn't see
    the legs were wrapped around me
    blinding me
    as I tasted of the stream that emerged
    drinking of your life almost as fast as
    the water surged
    puddles gathered in the here after
    tasting down that path of moisture in search
    of that comfort zone where
    every touch sends ripple effects in the water
    I wanted to make you holler
    scream my name into a happy home
    and It was over
    my eyes opened still inside that dark place
    even wider to adjust
    focus
    and the juices dripped
    **** you cum alot
    and in the pure excitement
    I bit deeper
    I needed to bite it deeper to keep her
    from holding it back
    a greedy muphucka I am when it comes to that
    and it's so phat
    a headache couldn't stop me
    so greedy I wanted a piece of you on top of me
    force feeding me
    with my own gluttony
    I swear you was trying to drown me with all that frustration
    the backed up juices no one took the time to pay any attention
    the sweetest fruits in the back that took time to permeate
    motivate
    to bubble up to the surface
    yet its so dark
    back and forth the water against your shores
    I feel every inch of you
    because my eyes have become yours
    and I see the beauty
    I taste the softness as you attempted to screw me
    or was I tongue fukking you
    there was no telling where you began and I ended
    a perfect portrait
    of when a man attempted to appease his own demons
    by taking orally a womans frustrations
    her inhibitions
    her innocence
    to break everything down to a whisper
    as the eyes said everything
    in the lustful darkness
    in the folds of....

    love
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    liking every drop keep em flowing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep scribe this was a ride pushing inward
    tyte drop bruh !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh see here you go again...tight spicy flava
     
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    say whaaaa.... :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:

    ...you already know poet
    I don't even need to say anything about how :hot:
    this was...

    *whew*​
     
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