Black Poetry : Poem Epic: ! Mystery's Song !

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***folks I wanted to test these poems by you. I haven't been around in a while due to school. But i'm working on my first Poem Epic or Cycle and I wanted feedback from my family. I do apologize for my absence and response to these beautiful works of poetry and i'll try to do better.


    Libra


    L iving with the knowledge that I’m a vastly different entity…

    I nadvertently composed of so many components and mysteries.

    B eauty, brains and spirituality flow through my veins and looking at me one will see that I’m exactly who and what I should be.

    R efining the creative and artistic force of life from my eyes to my fingertips. Stylish,

    Classy and Kasualy Vintage.

    A lways and completely set apart. Simple, yet too complex to understand; yes suh!



    Welcome to the universe of a beautiful, deep and wonderful LIBRA.​





    Mystery’s Breeze



    Unknown…



    Enigmatic…



    Pure and dramatic…



    Step outside and loose yourself.

    Ask no questions and you receive the answers.

    Open your heart to the pulsing of reverbs and nouns….



    Sit on your couch, high off of crushed coffee grounds.

    Recline on the porch and feel the ill breeze from the south.



    No Comprehension…



    Sweet compensation…



    Black Rain and Silver Sun shine.

    Try not to understand the breeze that blows your way.

    Just allow it to trouble your waters briefly.

    Enjoy the beauty of induced experiences and things never done.

    Images and a collection of sensations and revitalizations that leave

    lasting indentions and smells of pure evaluations…



    Mystery’s Breeze flows from the south; shaking, stirring and straining.

    No one understands and the wise know better than to try.

    Embrace…



    Swim and loose yourself.

    Hair flying free in the blueness….

    Black and White.

    Sweet and Sour.

    Maroon and Indigo flows converge and greet the breeze.

    Night moods shift and one learns to accept the beauty and

    undiscovered philosophy of Mystery’s Breeze​





    Blue Robynsonn

    aka Daddy Blue







    “The name is Blue Robynsonn.”

    My other half….




    I smile and shake his hand, he’s my mirror

    Image. I can’t comprehend it!

    The man is a walking jazzy riff.

    He has that seductive/humor thing down!

    His eyes, the color of dark, bittersweet chocolate,

    twinkles. There’s more to this man than meets the eye.



    His image seems faintly nostalgic of 1920’s Harlem and

    fun at the Cotton Club or Savoy.

    I’m amazed.

    The man is clearly fresh…..

    Breezy, and classically definitive.

    Old-fashioned gentility and Simple silver-screen beauty

    confront me.

    Chills and ripples of respect and ease run through me.



    The scene shifts and suddenly I realize that the

    man I’m staring at is me….

    Blue Robynsonn…

    is my name.



    Kool, Kalm, Kollected and Kaptivating….

    Words that flow from my soul and ooze from my pores.

    Eccentric, gifted and wonderful…

    Like sweet Georgia peaches on a bright summer day.

    Being around him has his scent assailing my nose

    like opium and cognac.

    I forget where I’m at.



    Blue Robynsonn…

    is my name.



    Poetic and Artistic.

    Spiritual and some type of complex ritual,

    I embrace him and watch as I evolve.

    Intoxicating and Poignant.

    The man carries himself like the Godfather.

    Ooooooh, chylde, he’s so smooth.

    It’s like a child trying to master a Rubix cube.

    He boggles and intrigues me at the same time.

    I loose myself in that funky, mellow groove; the color

    of a deep, dark and pure blue.



    Blue…Blue…Blue Robynsonn…

    is my name.



    Old soul

    Neo soul

    Creative

    Innovative

    Artistic and light…..

    They have a tendency to call me ‘Chill Mode.’

    or perhaps you prefer ‘Soulstar?’

    It’s your choice.

    I’m here to live, love and move the masses by the music

    dripping from my voice,

    or the words of lyrical viscosity falling from my lips….

    Allow me to put a tic in your step,

    and a sway in your hip…

    Like rain to a draught drenched earth,

    embrace the blue-tinged beauty of

    my words, humor, spirit and soul.

    Echoes in the silence whisper,

    Blue Robynsonn…

    is my name.



    I split like Gemini the twins,

    then my reflection became one.

    I woke up to moon beams and silver rain,

    with the sweet knowledge that if you stare me deeply

    in the eyes…you will find that I am

    Blue Robynsonn

    Copyright 2004
    ~PropheticNsyght

     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate you poet. Now, turn out the haters by focusing your light outward.

    Love your work!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet you always move me deeply and for that I can never express my gratitude. It run's over! Much love to you sir and Blessings!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed everyone hit like a key note surely ya harvest is deep
    upward u go continue dis journey poeticly
     
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    This is a beautiful collection of styles and images and thoughts. Very stirring and thought-provoking. I must give you daps for this. Nice tos see you back! :wave:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All of you make my existence only sweeter. Thank you all for being instruments of God and his infinite beauty. I love you all.
     
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    I find these poems to have a different kind of flava than what I normally read from you. Your other pieces, hit me with a hammer, where as these, tap me on the shoulder, and lull me in. Hope that you get what I'm saying. Glad you found the time to drop some on us poet.
     
  8. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ma. You always inspire me and make me digg even deeper in myself than before! I am blessed to have and know you and I send all of my lofe to you.
     
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    The style of these pieces are very
    relaxing and i dig it.
    Very smooth and chill
    love it
     
  10. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again beautiful, thank you for your love and support. God bless you deeply. :smokin: :smokin: :smokin:
     
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