Black Poetry : Poem dedicated to my ex

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  1. torch

    torch Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Your no friend of mine" (based on tempamental's "no friend of mine")

    You told me I am your first love
    But you only want to be friends?
    You wanted someone else, someone who cheated
    Do you really wanna get hurt again


    You keep sending me texts telling me you will always love me
    Excuse me but according to you we are only good friends right?
    You aint no friend of mine, friends dont hurt each other like u hurt me
    If you want to be alone with your son wouldnt need to talk to an ex right?

    But if your ex decides he wants to leave you, dont bother coming to my door
    My door is closed, like you closed my heart and feelings at best
    I thought we were made for each other, all the things you said to me
    While you were saying them to me, you were thinking of your ex

    The sad part is, you done this before and ended up getting hurt
    You love the bad boys, and you wonder why you get hurt and cheated on
    Its a **** shame now that your son is gonna see you get abused this time
    Remember this....your no friend of mine...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can feel you here and knows ya pain of close doors on da heart
     
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    But if your ex decides he wants to leave you, dont bother coming to my door
    My door is closed, like you closed my heart and feelings at best
    I thought we were made for each other, all the things you said to me
    While you were saying them to me, you were thinking of your ex
    ^^^
    my fav part

    so many of us have went through this
    8/10-deep piece poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Others have been caught up in this kind of painful confusion, and can relate to the ache in your words. Emotively put, poet.
     
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