Quiet Poetry Lounge : POEM:"A WOMAN'S PIECE OF MIND"

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  1. Rhyme4ReasonFBR

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    "A WOMAN'S PIECE OF MIND"

    SHE TOSSED AND TURNED ALL NIGHT
    THINKING ABOUT THE FIGHT WE HAD
    ABOUT THE INSIGNIFICANT BUT WAS HELL BENT WHEN SAID
    WONDERING WHY SHE CAN'T FIND A MAN TO JUST BE THAT
    WASTED INVESTING PRECIOUS MOMENTS IN
    LITTLE BOYS WHO JUST WANT TO BE FED
    IN THE DARKNESS SHE WONDERS IF LOVE IS REALLY DEAD
    IS IT?

    WHERE WILL LOVE LEAD HER NEXT
    WILL IT BE A FAMILIAR HAND WHEN WE MEET AGAIN
    WILL SHE KNOW IT'S COME AND BE COMFORTABLE IN BREATHING
    SAVIOR TO PULL THE HAPPINESS OUT OF A DREAM AND MAKE IT TANGIBLE
    SOMEONE WHO WON'T TAKE NO FOR AN ANSWER
    TO PIERCE THROUGH A WOMAN'S ARMOR PLATED DEFENSE
    IS THIS KIND OF LOVE REALLY DEAD?
    IS IT?

    SOMEONE WHO BELIEVE IN DATING FOR A WHILE BEFORE TOUCHING
    SOMEONE WHO BELIEVE IN EXTENDED FOREPLAY BEFORE ********
    SOMEONE WHO UNDERSTANDS THE MENTAL ACHES AND PHYSICAL PAINS
    A SISTER GOES THROUGH ON THE DAY TO DAY WHEN IT RAINS
    AND LIKE A SPIRIT COME TO WASH IT ALL AWAY WITH CONVERSATION
    WHEN LOVE ASKS WHAT YOU WAS THINKING WITHOUT BEING AFRAID OF THE ANSWER
    A SISTA ASKING FOR A LIL ELEVATION

    BUT TO ROLL OVER AND LOOK AT THE TIME AND REALIZE HOW LONG
    THIS SONG HAS BEEN PLAYING
    FANTASIES ONLY LAST BUT SO LONG BEFORE THE MIST CLEARS
    TEARS DON'T LAST FOREVER LET ALONE YEARS
    SOMEONE WILL HEAR HER ONE DAY BUT TIL THEN
    GOTTA WAKE UP AND SEE THE GIFTS BEFORE HER
    TO BREATHE ALONE IS A BLESSING
    FOR ITS ANOTHER CHANCE GIVEN TO **** UP AGAIN
    TO GET UP FROM A LOSS TO WIN
    TONIGHT HE'S NOT LOSING ANY SLEEP SO ***** HIM

    A WOMAN DESERVES HER PIECE OF MIND
    AND THAT'S THE BOTTOM LINE


    ~RHYME
    "the truth is an offense, but not a sin"
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww..




    Poet i like youre skrybe....




    it was heartfeld...



    just how i feld......


    scary..






    keep writing Poet ...
    we want more...




    lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    :welldone: as if you was that man in that womans life
    tight drop..diggin ya style...
    Peace
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    very nicely written poet
     
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    Hi Reason..I am really digging this rhythm
    That trickle into my mind..
    a special beat
    feeling this piece
    Hi again and Welcome :wave:

    Blue
     
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