Black Poetry : Poem #2 (Land Of The Lost )

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  1. People_Power

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    Nobody looks past their nose, but looks with their eye’s into a gate witch doesn’t exist
    And the ever going Question of Why Exists
    The writings been shed on the wall before
    Hypocritical statements and communists
    Free my mind and let my soul leave my body behind
    Swing, head bopping and superior intellect will stand tall in the land of the lost
    But first people need to stop regulating minds and add a whack twist to cover up the mess they created in the first place
    If you losing who’s winning
    Because we are going to have to eventually clean up this mess
    No stress is to chill and look back with content with the state of mind you obtained
    While trying to help other people see this type of mind frame to fear is to not understand what you achieved in the first place and go back into the land of the lost.


    But even when your lost to unite as one and help you back up on your feet and make you drop that gun is what it was designed for in the first place don’t hate cause to hate is to fear and to fear will always lead up to shedding tears and eventually lead to the dark side of the force, of course curtsey and acceptance will have its tolerance and its cost but you lack this you better wake up quick from the land of the lost.

    A confused mind will always be left behind
    A Dazed brain will always be insane
    But if you consider the alternatives for life would you be the same?
    Now understand this imagine the ultimate poetry with weird intellectual twist it actually dose exist.
    Now your job is to find the way to fight your own cause.
    But keeping in mind you can’t lower you to the same standards they use constantly in the land of the lost.
    If I asked you to bring weaponry would you bring it?
    Now you’re slipping
    The pen’s mighty over the sword and ink will always be left behind and penetrate the skin it’s dipped in.
    But blood eventually fades and that’s what they don’t understand in the land of the lost

    But even when your lost to unite as one and help you back up on your feet and make you drop that gun is what it was designed for in the first place don’t hate cause to hate is to fear and to fear will always lead up to shedding tears and eventually lead to the dark side of the force, of course curtsey and acceptance will have its tolerance and its cost but you lack this you better wake up quick from the land of the lost.
     
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    very well done tyte scribe poet !!
     
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    nice drop...
    enjoyed the read...
    flow on...:angel1:
     
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    whoa...
    hot spam...
    this was ill...
    i like the way you put this down...
    very nice...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Hey Welcome:wave:
    wow
    nice scribe
    for real
    Peace
     
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    I loved reading your peace!
     
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    Your mind is a beacon in the land of the lost.

    Keep shining.

    Peace.
     
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    wow...thunder from down under indeed ya came wit it on this piece/peace...

    may the lost one day be found
     
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    hey guys

    thanks again for the encourgment will keep writting new ones 1- every 2 days i actually just posted another one , thanks again and remember whats the point of writting if nobody watches and takes it in and acts on it .

    cheers
    peep's
     
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    If you get any heavier the world will permanently tilt your way upon it's axis. This is tight no doubt. Your third eye is working...that is so good to see. POWER be to the PEOPLE!!!!!!!!


    blak
     
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