Black Poetry : pocket sizes...

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  1. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pocket size #1


    what got me was the smooth way
    you raped what was left of my identity…
    the way you grappled and gripped with
    destroying what could have lived…that’s
    what I get for falling in love with a
    confused soul.





    pocket size # 8


    regardless of how many suns you consume
    you won’t be able to lighten up what we used
    to have. I’ve figured that where ‘we’re’ concerned;
    it’s best if you be sun and i be moon and we occupy
    our respective spheres.




    pocket size #2



    it’s a pity that i can purchase things to enhance
    my beauty and add to what i have, however
    you can’t even purchase things ‘cause how can one
    purchase poverty to enhance the poverty of
    one’s soul?




    pocket size #3


    i got tired of listening to u radio
    the same weak tunes, tunes that no longer
    greet my ears with pleasure…but gives me
    gas. mannnnnnnnn if I could un-subscribe
    from you, trust me! I would!




    pocket size # 4


    i didn’t want to seem desperate…
    hell don’t want to seem desperate, but
    secretly I steal pieces of ur sound
    and litter my bed with it.


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sizing up the order ...tyte write
     
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    You know poet, this brought me to that feeling when someone is aggravating to say the least, but you still want a slice of them, cause it's them... Creatively brought.
     
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    RICH and WATZ...:thanks::thanks:
    nuff said!
     
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    You amaze me, the first two and the last were so heavy and beautiful and truly honest, my mind loved wrapping around them.
     
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    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my man...I thank YOU for your support! More than you know.
     
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    this is nothing less than

    BRILLIANT

    i'm reading "pocket size #3"

    and i'm thinking didn't i just say that to somebod?

    lol

    you talk my language
     
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    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YO sol'ja...thanks my man...I love Pocket Size #3 as well!:SuN023:
     
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    peace

    you paint a very vivid picture and bring thoughts to life........

    I can't stand the radio either...lol
     
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    LOL thank you so much for the love!:SuN040:
     
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