Black Poetry : PMS(Part 2 THE PAIN )

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sweet baby_face, Mar 17, 2004.

  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ladies, i hope u feel me
    brothas, i highly advise u not 2 be offended

    so respect my feelings
    cause i respect yrs
    mess with again sugar
    u'll think the exorcist is in yr home
    i'm just PMSing baby
    u know i love u
    but u don't understand what u're getting n2
    this a battle u can't win
    i'm aggravated and
    i can't fit my jeans
    i swear 2 Jesus, Matthew,Mark, Luke, and John
    leave me alone now boy
    or it's on
    4get about the rumble in the jungle
    try me one more time
    and i trying 2 be nice
    but u just hard-headed,ain't u
    see what will happen but this has 2 be continued

    :devil:
    Just a thought-provoking matter to ponder over
    I hope u won't hold me accountable 4 my words
    It's just how I feel sometimes
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok din
    at times as much as ya try
    to be nice...it dont work
    nice drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, sometimes we just feel this way. Keep flowing what you feel, I'll keep reading.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    release how you feel
    your scribe is tight
    liking this here
    flow on Poet of the Week
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad y'all lovin' it.
     
  6. ille$t poete$$

    ille$t poete$$ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice

    once again you brougt that natural fire! luv'd this! real real nice! lol let them brutha no whatz up! ya digg!
    HAWLA
    *1 luV*
    -tha ille$t :peace:
     
  7. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad u feel me.
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...thi is cool...i feel u...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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