Black Poetry : ...Pleasure Unerased...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Sep 29, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lightning tongue
    prevailent kisses
    travel down
    to do my wishes
    sending me
    to places i
    shouldn't be
    on this night
    first real kiss
    i've ever had
    earlier kisses
    were too bad...
    this one has
    my headin' turnin'!
    this one has
    my body burnin'!
    afraid of next
    things to occur
    my mind text
    isn't too sure...
    should i give
    myself away?
    or should i live
    in a body saved?
    for the one
    i am so sure
    is the one
    so great and pure
    my mind is
    in a frozen state
    should i give
    such a mistake?
    he's takin' me
    to paradise...
    hittin' spots on me
    left and right!
    givin' me feelin's
    i've never had!
    eyes on the ceiling
    want him so bad!...
    now i'm layin'
    so confused
    i'm still layin'
    he continues
    to pleasure me
    inside and out
    taken exctasy
    wantin' to shout!
    before i know it
    pain takes it toll
    grips and releases
    i have no control
    pain turns into
    pleasure unerased
    we continue
    our script in a pace
    next thing i know
    i'm in his arms
    seventeen years old
    no longer alarmed...
    something tells me
    he is the one
    we're in year three
    and he's my husband...

    :love:
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice...like alot
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely written i hear ya !
    tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
     
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    hot hot hot :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so beautiful...and i love happy endings. much love
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody:)
     
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    as always this was beautiful...with a lil' twist of the lovely heat!
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awe...(big goofy grin on my face) shucks...lol
     
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