Black Poetry : please...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Aug 27, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please…
    Don’t take offense
    Against
    My
    Lackadaisical comments
    Of
    Unsolicited love

    If I had it within my power
    To recall unwanted desires
    …retract frivolous comments
    Hence…
    Erasing from memory
    Those spurious statements
    Which, I confess
    Came out of nowhere

    I would

    I thought I’d
    Take a chance
    That romance would return
    But, now, I’m concerned
    About your view of me

    So,
    Please,
    Don’t take offense
    At my
    Lackadaisical
    Comments
    Of lust and
    Make-believe love
    Just because
    You’re all I think of.

    PLEASE.
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boy U dun been stung
    Somebody get me some of dat
    Auhrahh calami ???
    You know the **** to make the swelling go down (LOL)


    I am just old and bitter, don’t mind me I am just trying to recal(LOL)
    Loved the flow poet keep that feelin
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller

    only you can do the dayum thang like you do the dayum thang... and that dayum thang you do is well worth the read





    One
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    brutha ya done gone and hit top of da chart wit dis here
    flow head on and do what u do ..........tyght
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller...and ofcourse, i'm lovin' it!
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FAM. 'preciate dat.:)

    oneLove.
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is achingly sweet...beautiful words...

    K
     
  8. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice baller!!!
     
  9. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you sho do have a way wit sweet words!! :)

    this was divine, mydear!! ...how could she
    possib-ly be offended?

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautifully scribed as usual. :)


    Scribeaboutit! It helps
    Coco :heart:
     
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