Black Poetry : PLEASE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Mar 19, 2006.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Things ain't like they used to be

    Misunderstanding FREE

    Still ridiculing me

    Geeze... :skate:

    Knock at the door ~

    Same old calamity

    Shiftless defining me

    Relic of slavery's deed

    Rich and then poor

    Class of the enemy

    Cursed by divinity

    That's my reality?


    PLEASE!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :tongue3:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2006
     
  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YO I WAS FEELIN DAT,THINGS AINT HOW THEY UESD 2 BE, SO FLOW ON WITH NON STOP
    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i fel this one , just ain't da same !
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poetsought you know i love's ya. you've always shown me love and now i feel i have to give it back. i like your style of work not just to flatter you but i mean from my heart. love to see it everytime. so keep up the good writes my brotha always.:love:
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know that's right.
    Flo on 1Poet.
    One love
     
  6. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice,deep and straight to the point!:love:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was hott as usual
    Much Love Poet
    You are one of my favorites
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PLEASE!!!

    Thank you..
     
  9. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so feeling your voice on this..
    Nice drop.
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a ill drop..... that was hot.... got me thinking....

    The days of yesterday have fanished
    we now life in desilution
    and prostituting our evolution
    now racisim is hidden
    we once where called
    out of our names in public
    and now they
    elude us with kindness
    giving us benefits
    yet still they show
    their racist fate
    by devouring our heritage
    and yet dening our
    existance of persistance.
     
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