Black Poetry : Please Tell Him

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Destee, Jan 24, 2001.

  1. Destee

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    please tell our friend i miss him so
    his words his love his soulful flow
    please tell him that i think of him
    from the start of day 'til light grows dim
    please tell him there's a great big smile
    on my face just like a child
    please tell him that i miss his hand
    holding mine as we walked thru sand
    please tell him that i miss the way
    he made me feel every single day
    please tell him that i'm holding on
    to each ray of light he let me own
    please tell him that i love him still
    forever more and always will
    please tell him ...
     
  2. GQ

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    Ya did already in this rhyme!!! Nice Destee!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

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    i remember this piece....!!!!!

    des...

    thanks for sharing...

    this reminds me of REASON...
    & how i'll be glad when he
    gets his *** ova here & posts
    something... so if you see
    him before i do... Please Tell Him... :)

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    This piece is definetely felt..... I agree. Reason is hella talented, miss seeing his work... Somebody find him and tell him to get his booty over here....

    8th!
     
  5. Destee

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    GQ ... thanking you again for bringing my peace's to the top
    thank you for remembering Sunshyne
    thank you 8th Wonder for the read & response

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin' the flow on this piece as it floats, destee. if i find him, i'll tell him what you said, gurl....
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummmm hummm

    just flashin on back !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!






    One
     
  8. shaz

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    this is nice
    God bless
     
  9. Destee

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    if yall see him ... please tell him for me

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    if yall see him ... please tell him for me

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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