Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poeticsoulsista, Jul 23, 2003.
No longer continued.....
Memoirs of a "Playa"
I agree with play for real...this was soo good
Peace and Blessings Play and Swt
I like that Play and swt but I want to try and get as many titles as I possibly can before I make a final decision andmake it all pretty and stuff to give to my friend for his daughter. But as I said before I really appreciate you taking time to read and respond to my work. It means alot to me.
Wow this was...somethin rarely spoken on but so very well captured. Sounds like the brotha experienced a "Rebirth"
THE ENVELOPE PLEASE...
Yo' Playa, call it: "TURNED OUT!"
Seeing The Light
Triniti: I really like that title. It's says so much in only one word. Thanks for your input. So far that's the best title yet. Thanks for all the support and help.
Poetsought : "Turn out is "a very interesting titile. It's very broad. I'm not getting the whole perspective of why you choose turned out so please explain more if you will. I also would like to thank you for your input. I like that you came from this angle. I like.... I like....
Blue water: I'm a little confused is the title ur suggesting "seeing the light"? if so please explain to me why you choose that title. I'm getting it but I'm not. I'm a little slow sometimes. Thank you very much. Much love to you for ur support. :luvv:
i have trouble with title
but the other family member
do have some
Because, I said so...
Well isn't that what it's all about?
1. The cause: A young Q-U-E-E-N is disrespected = TURNED OUT
2. The effect: A misguided brutha with a pimps mentality is dragged into a court of law and = TURNED OUT
3. The Outcome: As a result of their union a beautiful new creation is born, resulting in loving concern for a daughter whom Big Daddy fears may be = TURNED OUT
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