Black Poetry : Please help!! I need a title Very bad.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poeticsoulsista, Jul 23, 2003.

  1. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No longer continued.....
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I suggest

    Memoirs of a "Playa"

    you like???

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with play for real...this was soo good :toast:
     
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    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and Blessings Play and Swt
    I like that Play and swt but I want to try and get as many titles as I possibly can before I make a final decision andmake it all pretty and stuff to give to my friend for his daughter. But as I said before I really appreciate you taking time to read and respond to my work. It means alot to me.

    :grouphug:

    Ashe
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow this was...somethin rarely spoken on but so very well captured. Sounds like the brotha experienced a "Rebirth"
     
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    THE ENVELOPE PLEASE...

    Yo' Playa, call it: "TURNED OUT!"
     
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    hey Poeticsoulsista
    Seeing The Light
    Peace
     
  8. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Triniti: I really like that title. It's says so much in only one word. Thanks for your input. So far that's the best title yet. Thanks for all the support and help.:kiss:

    Poetsought : "Turn out is "a very interesting titile. It's very broad. I'm not getting the whole perspective of why you choose turned out so please explain more if you will. I also would like to thank you for your input. I like that you came from this angle. I like.... I like....:)

    Blue water: I'm a little confused is the title ur suggesting "seeing the light"? if so please explain to me why you choose that title. I'm getting it but I'm not. I'm a little slow sometimes. Thank you very much. Much love to you for ur support. :luvv:
     
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    hey Poeticsoulsista
    Reawakening..
    i have trouble with title
    but the other family member
    do have some
    wonderful titles
    Peace :heart:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Because, I said so...

    Well isn't that what it's all about?

    1. The cause: A young Q-U-E-E-N is disrespected = TURNED OUT

    2. The effect: A misguided brutha with a pimps mentality is dragged into a court of law and = TURNED OUT

    3. The Outcome: As a result of their union a beautiful new creation is born, resulting in loving concern for a daughter whom Big Daddy fears may be = TURNED OUT
     
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