Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da1whoownslife, Feb 15, 2004.
felt deep every word
mental wisdom gave
to stop da pain ya heart
craved forth unto thee
is open arms hold faith
thy so will carry u
the cries of tears he taste
and the doors open to his
humble place , walk as u art
and live ya dream tender soul
wash clean u knoweth whom u are
from the mirror comfort start
a young Queen into her own
yes u now can carry on
messenger of heart ...
da healing just start
I felt ya mental and heart pain
flow on express self openly
that was str8 from the heart
i feel u typing tears on the keyboard
it is good that u share this with the family
i hope this was the release you needed. keep your head up there will be rainbow after the storm.
I had a childhood friend that was violated at age 11 in school no less. Wise you are to already know that god is the one to turn to for in him there is no pain only the love of your true essence. In sharing this with us, I hope you feel a load, however slight, has been lifted. Keep writing, young talented sister.
So true, girl, that biological age isn't an indicator of much most times. I am am almost a couple decades a head of ya, and have wondered this same question: how do you know when you're grown. I know that personally, I will never stop growing and evolving until the day I die. It's just my nature. Over the last few years, I have decided that "being grown" is more of a cultural illusion.
I think a more pertinent question is, how do you know when you're at peace. Those demons you are describing - I have some of my own. We all do. I think when you come to terms with them and let them all pass out of your system and being, that is where the peaceful place begins, and it's the springboard for one to leap to great things.
I love the honesty and realness of this piece, Da1. I am feelin ya on many levels, and I am glad you wrote this. Sendin you peace and love as you continue on your path, girl.
Thank you, gempis......
I am so saddened after this poem
How can an adult cause a five year old harm
I feel so alone
Because I don't know how to show my love to you more
I know where you comin' from
But I don't know how your really feel because I haven't come from there before
However, I can say
The more you pray
The more the storm will change to a brighter day
The more the pain shall shift it's weight
And the less pain you will entake
Keep your head up sister and keep up the pray
day after day!!!
For he hears everything you say!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Foxi... People can do some evil things......... Thanks for da love..... :spinn:
Our prayers are forever with you. Keep your head up and stay in the positive direction. ::
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