Black Poetry : Please Father forgive me........

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FROM ABOVE
    prayers heard
    felt deep every word
    fogiveness honored
    mental wisdom gave
    to stop da pain ya heart
    craved forth unto thee
    is open arms hold faith
    thy so will carry u
    the cries of tears he taste
    and the doors open to his
    humble place , walk as u art
    and live ya dream tender soul
    wash clean u knoweth whom u are
    from the mirror comfort start
    a young Queen into her own
    yes u now can carry on
    from above
    thy
    messenger of heart ...
    da healing just start

    I felt ya mental and heart pain
    flow on express self openly
     
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    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was str8 from the heart
    i feel u typing tears on the keyboard

    it is good that u share this with the family
     
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    i hope this was the release you needed. keep your head up there will be rainbow after the storm.
     
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    I had a childhood friend that was violated at age 11 in school no less. Wise you are to already know that god is the one to turn to for in him there is no pain only the love of your true essence. In sharing this with us, I hope you feel a load, however slight, has been lifted. Keep writing, young talented sister.
     
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    So true, girl, that biological age isn't an indicator of much most times. I am am almost a couple decades a head of ya, and have wondered this same question: how do you know when you're grown. I know that personally, I will never stop growing and evolving until the day I die. It's just my nature. Over the last few years, I have decided that "being grown" is more of a cultural illusion.

    I think a more pertinent question is, how do you know when you're at peace. Those demons you are describing - I have some of my own. We all do. I think when you come to terms with them and let them all pass out of your system and being, that is where the peaceful place begins, and it's the springboard for one to leap to great things.

    I love the honesty and realness of this piece, Da1. I am feelin ya on many levels, and I am glad you wrote this. Sendin you peace and love as you continue on your path, girl.
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, gempis...... :grouphug:
     
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    I am so saddened after this poem
    How can an adult cause a five year old harm
    I feel so alone
    Because I don't know how to show my love to you more
    I know where you comin' from
    But I don't know how your really feel because I haven't come from there before
    However, I can say
    The more you pray
    The more the storm will change to a brighter day
    The more the pain shall shift it's weight
    And the less pain you will entake
    Keep your head up sister and keep up the pray
    day after day!!!
    For he hears everything you say!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Foxi... People can do some evil things......... Thanks for da love..... :spinn:
     
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    Our prayers are forever with you. Keep your head up and stay in the positive direction. ::grouphug::
     
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