Black Poetry : Please dont ...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Aug 3, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know you are tired....
    and i know ..
    you want to go Home....
    But please stay Inspired...
    Let the Lord lead his own...

    Now i know i hear you saying...

    "Who do you think that you are !"'
    "I lost my wife and my Family !"
    "And my heart full of Scars !"

    Its alright.....
    youre anger ....
    let it ..
    out...

    But Please dont Give up HOPE...
    please dont give up..
    no no...
    Please dont Give up HOPE..
    Please dont Give up THe LIGHT...

    We all have a fire...
    its in our hearts, minds,flesh,and bones..
    But dont let the fire ...
    blow away by the Storms and the Harm...

    Now i know i hear you saying...

    ""What do you know about Life!""
    ""I lost my husband and my children!""
    "' And i am desthened to DIE ""

    its alright..
    to cry...

    But please dont give up HOPE.
    Please dont give up ..
    no...
    Please dont give up HOPE
    Please dont give up THE LIGHT..


    Please dont...
    Though No ONe will Understand...

    But some DAY He,ll Take us there...
    till than i will hold youre hand...
    Please dont give up the LIGHt...

    Please dont...
    And i know that pain is there...
    But i know He,ll take that all Away...

    Till than i will hold youre Hand..

    but ..
    please ..
    dont ..
    give ..
    up...

    The Light...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i know this so well
    never give up da light
    forth da light is he .................

    say it so we may hear .
     
  3. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    liby this was beautiful......
    keep scrybing......

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful piece
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooo I needed to rad somthing like this today. Very beautiful piece

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful pieces
    my sister
    much love
    Peace
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for kim.....

    and thank you beautifull poets...

    yes some day He will take us there.....

    Love L
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful liberty, this is a wonderful poem
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    A beautiful piece..full of hope..blessed you are, keep it coming!
     
  10. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so beautiful........
     
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